Phân tích 'Governments should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the public. Do you agree or disagree?' IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Computer-based 15/5/2022 & 9/3/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về 'The number of visitors in the UK' IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích 'Governments should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the public. Do you agree or disagree?' IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Computer-based 15/5/2022).

Governments should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the public. Do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE 
    • Main idea: (Viết về supporting professional sports) the  professional  sports  bring  name  and  fame  to  a  country >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "sport" và "sports" trong tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
        • Countries, which spend a lot on such sports,  are always leading in sports in the Olympic  Games,  the World Cup and other such international competitions.  
        • Professional sports also boost the economy as millions of spectators come to see and cheer for their favorite teams in the stadiums. 
        • There are also big benefits from advertisements on TV as millions of people sit in front of  TV and watch sports shows. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase từ "benefit" tiếng anh
      • Example:  The dominance of Brazilian soccer stars like Pelé and Neymar on the international stage has undeniably solidified Brazil's reputation as a powerhouse in the sport. Their achievements bring immense national pride and put Brazil in the global spotlight.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE 
    • Main idea: (Viết về art performances for the public) the cultural programs are effective ways that help people relax and reduce stress after work
      • Supporting idea:
        • Every day, there are a variety of cultural performances happening all over the world, and these fascinate thousands of young  people  as well as adults.  
        • These cultural programs not only enrich people’s mind, but also spread our rich culture globally. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "spread" tiếng anh
      • Example: A study published in the Journal of the American College of Health (2017) found that engaging with the arts, including attending live performances, can lead to reduced stress and anxiety levels. The study suggests that the immersive experience of art can promote relaxation and emotional well-being.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Governments worldwide face the challenge of deciding whether to allocate (phân bổ – to distribute resources for a specific purpose) funds to nurture school students’ engagement in sport and art or to support professional activities accessible to the public. I totally disagree with the idea that investment should exclusively target schools, as professional sports and art performances bring tremendous value to nations and individuals alike.

Firstly, professional sports generate both national prestige (uy tín quốc gia – widespread respect and admiration a country gains) and substantial economic gains. Countries that heavily invest in such sports often dominate global competitions such as the Olympic Games and the World Cup, thereby solidifying their reputations on the world stage. Moreover, professional sports foster a multibillion-dollar industry (ngành công nghiệp hàng tỷ đô – a sector that generates vast revenue), attracting international tourists, ticket sales, and lucrative broadcasting rights. For instance, the dominance of Brazilian soccer icons like Pelé and Neymar has not only filled stadiums with millions of spectators but also consolidated (củng cố – to make stronger or more certain) Brazil’s standing as a powerhouse in global football. This dual impact of fame and economic strength highlights why professional sports deserve governmental backing.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Secondly, public art performances serve as therapeutic outlets (lối thoát trị liệu – activities that improve emotional or psychological health) for citizens and act as a bridge for cultural exchange. Daily cultural events across the globe captivate both the young and old, offering moments of joy and stress relief after long working hours. Beyond relaxation, these programs enrich people’s minds and disseminate local traditions worldwide, thereby preserving cultural heritage. For example, research published in the Journal of the American College of Health (2017) demonstrated that engaging with the arts, including attending live performances, significantly reduces stress and anxiety. This proves that government support for public art is not merely about entertainment but about promoting emotional well-being and cultural pride.

In conclusion, supporting professional sports and public art is crucial, as they not only enhance a nation’s global image and economic prosperity but also improve citizens’ cultural and psychological health.

New Vocabulary with Definitions, Synonyms & Antonyms

1. allocate (phân bổ – to distribute resources for a specific purpose)

   • Synonyms: distribute, assign, designate

   • Antonyms: withhold, retain, deprive

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Governments worldwide face the challenge of deciding whether to allocate funds..."

2. national prestige (uy tín quốc gia – widespread respect and admiration a country gains)

   • Synonyms: honor, reputation, distinction

   • Antonyms: disgrace, dishonor, obscurity

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Professional sports generate both national prestige and substantial economic gains."

3. multibillion-dollar industry (ngành công nghiệp hàng tỷ đô – a sector that generates vast revenue)

   • Synonyms: large-scale sector, high-revenue field, massive business

   • Antonyms: small-scale enterprise, minor trade, cottage industry

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Professional sports foster a multibillion-dollar industry..."

4. consolidated (củng cố – to make stronger or more certain)

   • Synonyms: strengthened, fortified, reinforced

   • Antonyms: weakened, undermined, diminished

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Pelé and Neymar... also consolidated Brazil’s standing as a powerhouse..."

5. therapeutic outlets (lối thoát trị liệu – activities that improve emotional or psychological health)

   • Synonyms: healing channels, restorative activities, stress-relievers

   • Antonyms: stressors, burdens, aggravations

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Public art performances serve as therapeutic outlets for citizens..."

Difficult Grammar Structures with Vietnamese Translation

1. “I totally disagree with the idea that investment should exclusively target schools, as professional sports and art performances bring tremendous value to nations and individuals alike.”

   • → Cấu trúc phức với mệnh đề danh từ "that investment should exclusively target schools" và cụm “as professional sports...” giải thích lý do.

   • Vietnamese: Tôi hoàn toàn không đồng ý với ý kiến rằng đầu tư chỉ nên tập trung vào trường học, vì thể thao chuyên nghiệp và biểu diễn nghệ thuật mang lại giá trị to lớn cho cả quốc gia và cá nhân.

2. “Countries that heavily invest in such sports often dominate global competitions such as the Olympic Games and the World Cup, thereby solidifying their reputations on the world stage.”

   • → Mệnh đề quan hệ "that heavily invest in such sports" + cấu trúc “thereby + V-ing” diễn đạt kết quả.

   • Vietnamese: Các quốc gia đầu tư nhiều vào những môn thể thao này thường thống trị các cuộc thi toàn cầu... qua đó củng cố danh tiếng của họ trên trường quốc tế.

3. “This proves that government support for public art is not merely about entertainment but about promoting emotional well-being and cultural pride.”

   • → Cấu trúc nhấn mạnh "not merely... but..." để so sánh.

   • Vietnamese: Điều này chứng minh rằng sự hỗ trợ của chính phủ cho nghệ thuật công cộng không chỉ đơn thuần là giải trí mà còn là thúc đẩy sức khỏe tinh thần và niềm tự hào văn hóa.

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