Phân tích "Governments should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the public. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Computer-based 15/5/2022 & 9/3/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Governments should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the public. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Computer-based 15/5/2022).

Governments should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the public. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE 
    • Main idea: (Viết về supporting professional sports) the  professional  sports  bring  name  and  fame  to  a  country >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "sport" và "sports" trong tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
        • Countries, which spend a lot on such sports,  are always leading in sports in the Olympic  Games,  the World Cup and other such international competitions.  
        • Professional sports also boost the economy as millions of spectators come to see and cheer for their favorite teams in the stadiums. 
        • There are also big benefits from advertisements on TV as millions of people sit in front of  TV and watch sports shows. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase từ "benefit" tiếng anh
      • Example:  The dominance of Brazilian soccer stars like Pelé and Neymar on the international stage has undeniably solidified Brazil's reputation as a powerhouse in the sport. Their achievements bring immense national pride and put Brazil in the global spotlight.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE 
    • Main idea: (Viết về art performances for the public) the cultural programs are effective ways that help people relax and reduce stress after work
      • Supporting idea:
        • Every day, there are a variety of cultural performances happening all over the world, and these fascinate thousands of young  people  as well as adults.  
        • These cultural programs not only enrich people’s mind, but also spread our rich culture globally. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "spread" tiếng anh
      • Example: A study published in the Journal of the American College of Health (2017) found that engaging with the arts, including attending live performances, can lead to reduced stress and anxiety levels. The study suggests that the immersive experience of art can promote relaxation and emotional well-being.

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