Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi IELTS 23/3/2023)
I. Đề bài
The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Brisbane has warmer weather than Canberra each month and their temperatures both grow in the first and last quarter >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "grow" tiếng anh
- Brisbane has more rainy days at the beginning and end of the year while Canberra has more rainy days in the middle of the year.
- Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
- Brisbane’s and Canberra’s highest daily temperatures begin at roughly 28 and 26 degrees Celsius in January then decrease to the lows of approximately 22 degrees and about 13 degrees in July, respectively, before recovering to their starting points by the end.
- Brisbane’s lowest temperature ranges from approximately 21 to roughly 12 degrees, whereas Canberra’s minimums are much cooler at between approximately 13 and around 3 degrees
- Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
- Brisbane witnesses the highest number of days with rain in the first quarter, at around 14 days each month. This nearly halves from June to September, before ascending to about 11 days by December.
- An average of about 7 to 8 days is recorded in Canberra for most of the period, except from June to August and October, when the figure grows to nearly 10 days >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "figure" tiếng anh
- Overall:
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The line graph and bar chart compare the average daily temperatures (nhiệt độ trung bình hàng ngày) and the mean number of rainy days (số ngày mưa trung bình) in Brisbane and Canberra over a year.
Overall, Brisbane enjoys warmer weather (thời tiết ấm hơn) than Canberra throughout the year, and both cities show a cyclical temperature pattern (mô hình nhiệt độ theo chu kỳ). In terms of rainfall, Brisbane has wetter months at the beginning and end of the year, while Canberra experiences peak rainfall (lượng mưa cao nhất) in the middle months.
In detail, the maximum temperature in Brisbane starts at nearly 28°C in January, dipping to around 22°C in July, before rebounding to its initial level. Canberra follows the same trend but at a substantially lower level (mức thấp hơn đáng kể), from about 26°C to 13°C. Similarly, minimum temperatures range between 21°C and 12°C in Brisbane, whereas Canberra’s are markedly cooler, from about 13°C down to only 3°C.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
As for rainfall, Brisbane records about 14 wet days (14 ngày mưa) per month from January to March, which declines to around 7 days in mid-year, then rises again to roughly 11 days in December. By contrast, Canberra averages 7–8 rainy days most months, but this climbs to (tăng lên) nearly 10 days from June to August and again in October.
🔑 New Vocabulary
average daily temperatures (nhiệt độ trung bình hàng ngày) – the mean maximum and minimum temperatures in one day.
Synonyms: mean temperature, typical daily heat, average climate
Antonyms: extreme heat, extreme cold, unusual weather
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The line graph compares the average daily temperatures..."
mean number of rainy days (số ngày mưa trung bình) – the average count of days with rainfall.
Synonyms: average wet days, typical rainy days, mean precipitation days
Antonyms: drought days, dry days, arid periods
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "the mean number of rainy days in Brisbane and Canberra..."
cyclical temperature pattern (mô hình nhiệt độ theo chu kỳ) – a repeating seasonal trend in temperature.
Synonyms: seasonal variation, recurring climate cycle, periodic pattern
Antonyms: random change, irregular shift, unpredictable trend
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "both cities show a cyclical temperature pattern."
peak rainfall (lượng mưa cao nhất) – the period with the greatest number of rainy days.
Synonyms: maximum precipitation, rainfall climax, heaviest rains
Antonyms: lowest rainfall, dry spell, drought
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Canberra experiences peak rainfall in the middle months."
substantially lower level (mức thấp hơn đáng kể) – much smaller value in comparison.
Synonyms: significantly lower, markedly reduced, noticeably smaller
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IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Canberra follows the same trend but at a substantially lower level..."
wet days (ngày mưa) – days with recorded rainfall.
Synonyms: rainy days, precipitation days, damp days
Antonyms: dry days, clear days, sunny days
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Brisbane records about 14 wet days per month..."
⚙️ Difficult Grammar Structures
enjoys + noun (figurative use)
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Brisbane enjoys warmer weather than Canberra..."
Translation: Brisbane có thời tiết ấm áp hơn Canberra.
Note: “enjoys” is figurative, not literal enjoyment.
... whereas / while + clause (contrastive linking)
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "whereas Canberra’s are markedly cooler..."
Translation: trong khi nhiệt độ tối thiểu của Canberra lạnh hơn nhiều.
As for + noun (transition phrase)
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "As for rainfall, Brisbane records about 14 wet days..."
Translation: Về lượng mưa, Brisbane ghi nhận khoảng 14 ngày mưa...
verb + to + number (used for trends)
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "which declines to around 7 days in mid-year..."
Translation: con số giảm xuống khoảng 7 ngày vào giữa năm.
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