Phân tích "Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 19/8/2022, 29/3/2023 & 22/8/2025 (computer-based))

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Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: An abundance of possessions will lead to advancements in technology, education and healthcare, thus benefiting its citizens beyond materialistic satisfaction 
      • Supporting idea:
        • Technology advancements have also led to improved communication, transportation, and access to information, which can enhance the standard of living and opportunities available to citizens. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "improved" tiếng anh
        • Increased wealth can lead to investment in public goods such as infrastructure and education, which can have long-term benefits for the community.
      • Example: 
        • For example, the development of medical technology and treatments has significantly increased life expectancy and improved overall health outcomes.
        • For instance, better roads and public transportation systems can increase mobility and access to job opportunities while a well-educated population can contribute to a more innovative and prosperous economy.>> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "mobility" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Citizens of developed countries have innumerable avenues to enjoy their life.
      • Supporting idea: Each additional dollar in a resident of a rich nation increases chances of purchasing products that bring joy and pleasure to him or her >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "resident" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • Developed countries often have more diverse and accessible cultural offerings, such as museums, theaters, and festivals, which can enrich the lives of citizens. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"offering"tiếng anh 
        • Developed countries often have more opportunities for travel and exploration, both within their own country and abroad, which can expand citizens' perspectives and provide them with new experiences.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Some scholars argue that once a nation achieves wealth, further economic growth does not necessarily improve the well-being of its people. However, I totally disagree with this claim, as additional prosperity can still bring about significant improvements in both public welfare and personal fulfillment.

To begin with, an abundance of possessions (sự phong phú của cải – a large quantity of valuable resources) and national wealth facilitates advancements in technology, education, and healthcare, which extend beyond mere material satisfaction. Technological progress, fueled by greater investments, has led to improved (được cải thiện – made better in quality or performance) communication, transportation, and access to information, thereby enhancing the standard of living (mức sống – the level of wealth, comfort, and material goods available) for citizens. Moreover, increased wealth (sự giàu có gia tăng – a rise in financial resources) enables governments to allocate funds to public goods such as infrastructure (cơ sở hạ tầng – the basic physical and organizational structures of a society) and education, generating long-term community benefits. For example, the development of advanced medical treatments has significantly (đáng kể – to a great extent) increased life expectancy and improved overall health outcomes, while better roads and transport systems enhance mobility (tính di động – the ability to move or be moved freely) and expand job opportunities.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

In addition, citizens of affluent nations have innumerable avenues (vô số con đường – countless opportunities or ways) to enjoy life, which further enhances their satisfaction. Each additional unit of income allows a resident (cư dân – a person who lives in a particular place) of a developed nation to purchase goods and services that bring joy and pleasure. For instance, wealthier societies often provide diverse cultural offerings (các sản phẩm văn hoá đa dạng – a wide variety of cultural activities and opportunities), such as museums, theaters, and festivals, all of which enrich the daily experiences of people. Furthermore, increased affluence provides opportunities for travel and exploration both domestically and internationally, broadening citizens’ perspectives and offering new experiences (trải nghiệm mới – different activities or events that add value to life) that contribute to their overall happiness.

In conclusion, additional economic wealth in rich countries undoubtedly continues to enhance the quality of life for their citizens, through both societal improvements and personal enjoyment.

🔑 New Vocabulary with Definitions + Synonyms & Antonyms

1. abundance of possessions – sự phong phú của cải – a large quantity of resources

   • Synonyms: plenty, wealth, profusion

   • Antonyms: scarcity, poverty, deficiency

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: An abundance of possessions will lead to advancements in technology.

2. improved – được cải thiện – made better in quality or performance

   • Synonyms: enhanced, upgraded, refined

   • Antonyms: worsened, deteriorated, declined

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Technological progress has led to improved communication and transportation.

3. standard of living – mức sống – the level of comfort and wealth of a population

   • Synonyms: living conditions, quality of life, lifestyle

   • Antonyms: poverty, hardship, deprivation

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Enhanced infrastructure raises the standard of living for citizens.

4. increased wealth – sự giàu có gia tăng – a rise in financial resources

   • Synonyms: greater prosperity, expanded affluence, rising fortune

   • Antonyms: decline in wealth, financial loss, impoverishment

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Increased wealth enables governments to fund infrastructure.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

5. infrastructure – cơ sở hạ tầng – basic physical and organizational structures

   • Synonyms: facilities, framework, foundation

   • Antonyms: ruin, disorganization, breakdown

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Increased wealth enables governments to invest in infrastructure and education.

6. mobility – tính di động – ability to move freely

   • Synonyms: movement, flexibility, circulation

   • Antonyms: immobility, rigidity, stagnation

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Better roads improve mobility and expand job opportunities.

7. innumerable avenues – vô số con đường – countless opportunities

   • Synonyms: countless options, myriad paths, unlimited choices

   • Antonyms: limited options, scarcity of opportunities, constraint

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Citizens have innumerable avenues to enjoy their life.

8. resident – cư dân – person living in a place

   • Synonyms: inhabitant, dweller, occupant

   • Antonyms: visitor, tourist, outsider

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Each resident of a rich nation benefits from wealth.

9. cultural offerings – sản phẩm văn hoá – cultural activities provided

   • Synonyms: cultural activities, artistic programs, heritage events

   • Antonyms: cultural absence, lack of culture, barrenness

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Developed countries provide diverse cultural offerings such as museums and festivals.

10. new experiences – trải nghiệm mới – fresh activities that add value

• Synonyms: novel events, unfamiliar activities, innovative opportunities

• Antonyms: routine, repetition, monotony

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Travel provides new experiences that broaden perspectives.

🔎 Difficult Grammar Structures

1. “An abundance of possessions and national wealth facilitates advancements in technology, education, and healthcare, which extend beyond mere material satisfaction.”

   • Structure: Complex sentence with relative clause “which extend beyond...”

   • Vietnamese: Sự phong phú của cải và sự giàu có quốc gia tạo điều kiện cho tiến bộ công nghệ, giáo dục và y tế, vốn vượt ra ngoài sự thoả mãn vật chất đơn thuần.

2. “Technological progress, fueled by greater investments, has led to improved communication, transportation, and access to information, thereby enhancing the standard of living for citizens.”

   • Structure: Reduced relative clause “fueled by greater investments” + adverbial clause “thereby enhancing...”

   • Vietnamese: Tiến bộ công nghệ, được thúc đẩy bởi đầu tư lớn hơn, đã dẫn đến giao tiếp, vận tải và tiếp cận thông tin tốt hơn, từ đó nâng cao mức sống.

3. “Each additional unit of income allows a resident of a developed nation to purchase goods and services that bring joy and pleasure.”

   • Structure: Complex sentence with relative clause “that bring joy...”

   • Vietnamese: Mỗi khoản thu nhập bổ sung cho phép cư dân của quốc gia phát triển mua hàng hóa và dịch vụ mang lại niềm vui và hạnh phúc.

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