Phân tích "International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should therefore be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​

· Đề thi thật Task 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should therefore be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​

I. Đề bài

International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should therefore be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In recent years, some argue that international air travel should be curtailed due to its detrimental effect on the environment. However, I totally disagree with this idea, as restricting global flights would not only hinder economic growth but also undermine cultural exchange.

On the economic front, air transport plays a pivotal (quan trọng, then chốt – crucial, essential, vital) role in facilitating tourism and trade, which are indispensable (không thể thiếu – necessary, fundamental, requisite) drivers of prosperity. For example, nations such as Thailand or Spain rely heavily on international visitors, and limiting flights would deal a severe blow (tổn thất nặng nề – serious damage, heavy setback, major harm) to their hospitality industries. Moreover, multinational companies depend on global mobility to conduct business, attend meetings, and negotiate contracts. Without air travel, the interconnected (liên kết chặt chẽ – closely linked, interrelated, interwoven) nature of the global economy would collapse, creating ripple effects on employment and living standards worldwide.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Equally important is the cultural dimension. Air travel allows people from different continents to meet, share, and foster mutual understanding. This cross-cultural (liên văn hoá – intercultural, transnational, international) interaction broadens people’s horizons and reduces prejudices, ultimately paving the way for a more harmonious world. If flights were restricted, such opportunities would vanish, leaving societies increasingly insular (khép kín, cô lập – isolated, narrow-minded, inward-looking) and intolerant. Although environmental concerns are legitimate, governments should prioritize sustainable aviation technologies such as biofuels and carbon offsetting instead of imposing blanket restrictions on flights.

In conclusion, restricting international air travel would do more harm than good, as it would jeopardize both global economies and cultural connectivity.

🔑 New Vocabulary with Explanation

  1. pivotal (quan trọng, then chốt – crucial, essential, vital)

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "air transport plays a pivotal role in facilitating tourism and trade."

  2. indispensable (không thể thiếu – necessary, fundamental, requisite)

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "tourism and trade, which are indispensable drivers of prosperity."

  3. severe blow (tổn thất nặng nề – serious damage, heavy setback, major harm)

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "limiting flights would deal a severe blow to their hospitality industries."

  4. interconnected (liên kết chặt chẽ – closely linked, interrelated, interwoven)

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "the interconnected nature of the global economy would collapse."

  5. cross-cultural (liên văn hoá – intercultural, transnational, international)

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "This cross-cultural interaction broadens people’s horizons."

  6. insular (khép kín, cô lập – isolated, narrow-minded, inward-looking)

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "leaving societies increasingly insular and intolerant."

🔄 Synonyms & Antonyms

1. pivotal

  • Synonyms: crucial, essential, vital

  • Antonyms: trivial, insignificant, minor

2. indispensable

  • Synonyms: necessary, fundamental, requisite

  • Antonyms: unnecessary, dispensable, optional

3. severe blow

  • Synonyms: serious damage, heavy setback, major harm

  • Antonyms: benefit, advantage, boost

4. interconnected

  • Synonyms: closely linked, interrelated, interwoven

  • Antonyms: separate, detached, disconnected

5. cross-cultural

  • Synonyms: intercultural, transnational, international

  • Antonyms: monocultural, isolated, parochial

6. insular

  • Synonyms: isolated, narrow-minded, inward-looking

  • Antonyms: open-minded, cosmopolitan, inclusive

📌 Difficult Grammar Structures

  1. Conditional with inversion

    • “Without air travel, the interconnected nature of the global economy would collapse.”

    • Nếu không có du lịch hàng không, bản chất liên kết của nền kinh tế toàn cầu sẽ sụp đổ.

  2. Concessive clause with “Although”

    • “Although environmental concerns are legitimate, governments should prioritize sustainable aviation technologies.”

    • Mặc dù các mối lo ngại về môi trường là chính đáng, chính phủ nên ưu tiên công nghệ hàng không bền vững.

  3. Not only... but also

    • “Restricting global flights would not only hinder economic growth but also undermine cultural exchange.”

    • Việc hạn chế các chuyến bay quốc tế không chỉ cản trở tăng trưởng kinh tế mà còn làm suy yếu sự giao lưu văn hóa.

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