Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Historical objects should be brought back to their country of origin. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Historical objects should be brought back to their country of origin. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea:  These objects have a genuinely unique association with the place where they were created or found (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: these valuable and antique artefacts certainly have historical significance and thus they reflect the glorified past of a country)
      • Supporting idea: Historical objects should always be an integral part of the cultural history of that area >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ "area" (Diễn đạt "khu vực" tiếng anh)
      • Example: 
        • During foreign invasions or colonization, valuable objects are taken away from a country, and the country of origin of these objects certainly have a legal and moral right to get them back.
        • A good example of this is in many African countries where their historic artifacts were pillaged during colonialism >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt While và During
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: When a nation returns these historical objects to the country of their origin, it strengthens the friendship / bond between them.
      • Supporting idea: This sharing can pave the way to a peaceful and harmonious environment in the world.
      • Example: many people in Vietnam have expressed anger over the loss of their historically important objects, and thus they harbour hatred for those countries which ruled them for years.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The question of whether historical artefacts (hiện vật lịch sử – historical objects that have cultural or historical value) should be returned to their countries of origin has sparked considerable debate. I totally agree that such objects ought to be repatriated because they embody a nation’s identity and their return can foster stronger international relations.

Firstly, many historical items possess a unique cultural heritage (di sản văn hoá độc nhất – the traditions, history, and identity of a particular society) that is inseparably linked to the place where they were created or discovered. These objects often carry historical significance (ý nghĩa lịch sử – importance related to historical events or periods) and therefore serve as tangible reminders (minh chứng hữu hình – physical evidence that reminds people of something) of a country’s past. When they are displayed abroad, the local population may feel disconnected from their own cultural legacy. Moreover, numerous artefacts were removed during periods of foreign domination (sự thống trị của nước ngoài – control of one country over another) or colonial expansion (sự mở rộng thuộc địa – the act of powerful countries taking control of other lands), often through looting or coercion. Countries that originally possessed these items clearly have both a moral entitlement (quyền lợi về đạo đức – a right based on fairness and ethics) and a legal basis to reclaim them. For instance, many African nations have long demanded the return of priceless sculptures and masks that were pillaged (cướp bóc – stolen violently during conflict or invasion) during the colonial era.>> 🔥 Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Secondly, the repatriation (việc hồi hương hiện vật – the act of returning cultural objects to their original country) of historical objects can strengthen diplomatic ties between nations. When a country voluntarily returns another nation’s cultural treasures, it demonstrates goodwill (thiện chí – friendly intentions and a desire to build positive relationships) and respect for cultural sovereignty. Such actions can help mend historical grievances and promote cross-cultural understanding (sự thấu hiểu liên văn hoá – mutual appreciation between different cultures). For example, people in Vietnam and other formerly colonized countries sometimes feel resentment toward nations that removed their artefacts in the past. Returning these objects could reduce hostility and contribute to a more harmonious global community (cộng đồng toàn cầu hoà hợp – a world where nations cooperate peacefully).

In conclusion, historical artefacts should be returned to their countries of origin because they preserve national heritage and their repatriation can encourage stronger international cooperation.

New Vocabulary 

1. historical artefacts (hiện vật lịch sử – objects with cultural or historical value)
Synonyms: relics, antiquities, historical objects
Antonyms: modern items, contemporary products, newly-made objects
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The question of whether historical artefacts should be returned to their countries of origin…”

2. unique cultural heritage (di sản văn hoá độc nhất – traditions and historical identity of a society)
Synonyms: distinct heritage, cultural legacy, ancestral heritage
Antonyms: cultural uniformity, cultural loss, cultural erosion
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “many historical items possess a unique cultural heritage that is inseparably linked to the place where they were created.”

3. tangible reminders (minh chứng hữu hình – physical evidence that reminds people of history)
Synonyms: visible symbols, physical evidence, material proof
Antonyms: abstract concepts, intangible ideas, theoretical notions
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “serve as tangible reminders of a country’s past.”

4. foreign domination (sự thống trị của nước ngoài – control imposed by another country)
Synonyms: external rule, overseas control, imperial authority
Antonyms: self-governance, national independence, sovereignty
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “removed during periods of foreign domination or colonial expansion.”

5. colonial expansion (sự mở rộng thuộc địa – the act of powerful nations taking control of other territories)
Synonyms: imperial expansion, territorial conquest, colonial rule
Antonyms: decolonization, independence movement, withdrawal
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “during periods of foreign domination or colonial expansion.”

6. moral entitlement (quyền lợi về đạo đức – a right based on fairness or justice)
Synonyms: ethical right, rightful claim, legitimate claim
Antonyms: illegitimate claim, unfair possession, unjust holding
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “countries… have both a moral entitlement and a legal basis to reclaim them.”

7. pillaged (cướp bóc – stolen violently during war or invasion)
Synonyms: looted, plundered, ransacked
Antonyms: protected, preserved, safeguarded
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “artifacts were pillaged during the colonial era.”

8. repatriation (việc hồi hương hiện vật – returning objects to their original country)
Synonyms: restoration, return, restitution
Antonyms: retention, confiscation, appropriation
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “the repatriation of historical objects can strengthen diplomatic ties.”

9. goodwill (thiện chí – friendly intentions between people or nations)
Synonyms: friendliness, positive intention, cordiality
Antonyms: hostility, resentment, ill will
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “it demonstrates goodwill and respect for cultural sovereignty.”

10. cross-cultural understanding (sự thấu hiểu liên văn hoá – understanding between different cultures)
Synonyms: intercultural awareness, cultural appreciation, global understanding
Antonyms: cultural misunderstanding, prejudice, intolerance
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “promote cross-cultural understanding.”

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