Phân tích "The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Bài mẫu + Giải thích vocab)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers." IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

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  • Overall:
    • Young people are more likely to pursue studies for career growth rather than interest. This trend reverses as people age. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "pursue" tiếng anh
    • As for employer assistance, the biggest beneficiaries were those aged under 26. 
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
    • While as much 80% of those aged under 26 choose to study with the objective of furthering their career, only about 20% of those over 49 study for the same reason. 
    • An equal proportion of people (40% each) aged between 40 and 49 studies for career and interest. 
    • 70% of those over 49 studies for interest. 
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • As much as 65% of those aged under 26 received the support of their employers
    • Those aged between 30 and 39 received the least amount of support at about 33%.
    • While about 38% of those in the 40-49 age bracket were supported by their employers, those over 49 received even more assistance (nêu số liệu) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "support" tiếng anh 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The charts illustrate the primary motivations (English: main reasons – Vietnamese: động lực chính) for studying across different age groups and the employer-provided support (English: help from companies – Vietnamese: sự hỗ trợ từ công ty) they received.

Overall, younger learners tend to study for career-oriented purposes (English: aiming for job advancement – Vietnamese: vì mục tiêu nghề nghiệp), whereas older individuals are more inclined to study out of personal interest (English: liking or curiosity – Vietnamese: sở thích cá nhân). Support from employers was disproportionately higher (English: not equally distributed – Vietnamese: phân bố không đồng đều) among the youngest group.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

In detail, a significant majority (English: a large portion – Vietnamese: phần lớn) of those under 26 (80%) pursued education to enhance their career prospects (English: improve job opportunities – Vietnamese: nâng cao cơ hội nghề nghiệp). This proportion declines steadily with age, with only 20% of those over 49 sharing the same motivation. By contrast, 70% of people in the oldest group studied out of interest. Notably, those aged 40–49 showed equal enthusiasm (English: same level of interest – Vietnamese: mức độ quan tâm ngang nhau) for both purposes.

Regarding support, 65% of under-26s received workplace backing (English: support from their companies – Vietnamese: sự hỗ trợ nơi làm việc), whereas only 33% of those aged 30–39 were supported. Interestingly, employer assistance increased again among older age groups, reaching approximately 45% for those above 49.

🔹 New Vocabulary (with synonyms & antonyms):

1. Primary motivations (động lực chính)

   • Synonyms: main reasons, chief incentives, driving forces

   • Antonyms: secondary reasons, minor factors, afterthoughts

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The charts illustrate the primary motivations for studying across different age groups...

2. Employer-provided support (sự hỗ trợ từ công ty)

   • Synonyms: company backing, work-related aid, organizational support

   • Antonyms: lack of assistance, no backing, absence of help

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: ...and the employer-provided support they received.

3. Career-oriented purposes (vì mục tiêu nghề nghiệp)

   • Synonyms: job-driven goals, employment-related aims, occupational targets

   • Antonyms: hobby-based learning, personal fulfillment, interest-only study

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: ...younger learners tend to study for career-oriented purposes...

4. Disproportionately higher (phân bố không đồng đều)

   • Synonyms: unevenly distributed, significantly greater, irregularly higher

   • Antonyms: evenly distributed, equally shared, balanced

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: ...support from employers was disproportionately higher among the youngest group.

5. Enhance their career prospects (nâng cao cơ hội nghề nghiệp)

   • Synonyms: improve job opportunities, boost employability, advance career path

   • Antonyms: diminish job options, restrict opportunities, lower chances

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: ...pursued education to enhance their career prospects.

🔹 Difficult Grammar Structures (with Vietnamese translation):

1. "whereas older individuals are more inclined to study out of personal interest"

   • ➤ "whereas" is used to contrast two clauses.

   • Vietnamese: Trong khi những người lớn tuổi lại có xu hướng học vì sở thích cá nhân.

2. "Notably, those aged 40–49 showed equal enthusiasm for both purposes."

   • ➤ "Notably" introduces an important or striking detail.

   • Vietnamese: Đáng chú ý, nhóm tuổi 40–49 thể hiện mức độ quan tâm ngang nhau đối với cả hai mục đích.

3. "Regarding support, 65% of under-26s received workplace backing..."

   • ➤ "Regarding" is used as a linking device.

   • Vietnamese: Về mặt hỗ trợ, 65% nhóm dưới 26 tuổi nhận được hỗ trợ từ nơi làm việc.

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