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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích đề"In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng & ideas topic "obesity" IELTS
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Childhood obesity: Béo phì ở trẻ em
- Fast food (n) /fɑːst/ /fuːd/: thức ăn nhanh
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- With this rate of consuming fast food, young generations would have to suffer from several serious health problems in the future. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "rate" tiếng anh
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Junk food (n) /dʒʌŋk//fuːd/: đồ ăn vặt
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Many people have a habit of eating junk food whenever they watch movies, which may lead to weight gain and increase in stroke risk.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- PE – Physical Education (n) /ˈfɪzɪkl/ /ˌedʒuˈkeɪʃn/giáo dục thể chất
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Schools needs to leave more budget to develop PE for their students.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Epidemic (n) /epɪˈdemɪk/: dịch bệnh
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- If a flu epidemic hit England this September, and more than eight million people will be suffering from it.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Diagnose (v) /ˈdaɪəɡnəʊz/: chẩn đoán
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Many urbanists have been diagnosed with cancer due to their unhealthy eating habits.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Disorder (n) /dɪsˈɔːdə(r)/: rối loạn
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Eating disorder, including inadequate or excessive food intake, can do damage to an individual’s well-being.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Obese (adj) /əʊˈbiːs/: béo phì
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- An obese child may suffer from many difficulties in his daily life. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic CHALLENGE trong IELTS SPEAKING
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Infect (v) /ɪnˈfekt/: lây nhiễm
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- The meat had been infected with E. coli bacteria.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Addiction (n) /əˈdɪkʃn/: nghiện
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Addiction to smoking nicotine can increase lung cancer risk.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Mental illness /ˈmentl//ˈɪlnəs/: bệnh tâm lý
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- In modern society, mental illness is an example of a problem faced by every country in the world
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- A typical sign of deteriorating public health: Dấu hiệu điển hình của sức khỏe cộng đồng đang đi xuống
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- To combat the childhood obesity crisis: Chiến đấu với khủng hoảng béo phì ở trẻ em
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Vaccine (n) /ˈvæksiːn/: vắc-xin
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Influenza vaccine should be provided to the poor by the government to prevent flu epidemic.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Nutrients (n) /ˈnjuːtriənt/: chất dinh dưỡng
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Children need 11 essential nutrients in their daily diet to stay healthy. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của "nutrition"
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Impaired (Adj) /ɪmˈpeəd/: khiếm khuyết, suy yếu
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- People with hearing-impaired will have to suffer from many difficulties in life.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Depression (n) /dɪˈpreʃn/: trầm cảm
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Depression after childbirth can have serious effect on women.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- To encourage regular exercise and healthy diets: Khuyến khích luyện tập thường xuyên và ăn uống hợp lý
- To receive appropriate nutrients from their food: Nhận chất dịnh dưỡng phù hợp từ thức ăn
- Poor choice of diet for their kids: Lựa chọn chế độ ăn sai lầm cho con cái
- To reduce one’s stress levels: giảm mức độ căng thẳng
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Listening to classical music can help reduce your stress levels.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- To build up resistance to disease: tăng cường sức đề kháng bệnh
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Eating fruits and vegetable would build up children’s resistance to disease.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- To go on a diet: ăn kiêng
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Youngsters tend to go on diet occasionally to keep fit.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- To make a full recovery: hồi phục hoàn toàn
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Fortunately, the man has made a full recovery from heart stroke.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Side effects: tác dụng phụ
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Doctors sometimes cannot fully predict all side effects of several medicines. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng dự đoán tương lai IELTS Writing Task 1
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- To choose healthy eating patterns that contain less sugar and fat: Chọn khẩu phần ăn chứa ít đường và chất béo
- The sedentary lifestyle: Lối sống ít vận động
- To have a balanced diet: có chế độ ăn uống cân bằng
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- It is essential for children to have a balanced diet for a healthy growth.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- To be overweight: thừa cân
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Being overweight since young ages can lead to many serious health problems on growing up.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- To alleviate (the) pain/symptoms: giảm đau/giảm triệu chứng
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Painkillers are used widely to alleviate the pain but they are not recommended because of their side effects. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "alleviate" tiếng anh
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Curb the obesity epidemic: Kiểm soát và hạn chế sự tăng lên của tình hình béo phì
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: The role of a competent and responsible government is to ensure the well-being of its people. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "responsible" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: If there is any serious threat to the people, as childhood obesity is, the government should be the one to first realize such a threat, introduce and put solutions into practice (The government should encourage regular exercise & healthy diets). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng Topic Government/Politics IELTS
- Example: In Singapore, the government has implemented measures to combat childhood obesity, such as mandating calorie information on restaurant menus, providing subsidies for healthy school meals, and offering financial incentives for children to participate in sports programs, which have proven effective in reducing obesity rates.
- Main idea: The role of a competent and responsible government is to ensure the well-being of its people. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "responsible" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Childhood obesity is caused by the fact that the government fails to enact legislations that prevent food companies from producing unhealthy convenience food as well as advertising them on mass media
- Supporting idea: Advertisements on foods and drinks that contain high level of sugar and fat should be restricted on TV and other means of mass media. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic Advertising
- Example: Since 2017, a ban on junk foods and soft drinks advertisement before 9 p.m. has come into effect by the UK.
- Main idea: Childhood obesity is caused by the fact that the government fails to enact legislations that prevent food companies from producing unhealthy convenience food as well as advertising them on mass media
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
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