Phân tích "In many countries today, people buy a range of household goods ( television, microwave, oven and rick cookers) Is it a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many countries today, people buy a range of household goods (television, microwave, oven and rick cookers). Is it a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In many countries today, people buy a range of household goods ( television, microwave, oven and rick cookers) Is it a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng NEGATIVE):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: the greater productivity is the more industrial waste that manufacturing plants release to the environment.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "productivity" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea:
      • Consumers who dump cars or TV sets which are still in use should be to blame for.
      • The use of cars is often held responsible for environmental pollution because exhaust emissions from automobiles impair the air quality and consequently affect people’s health.
      • Using fridges and televisions also places pressure on electricity supply in the world when the growing use of these devices in the home merely compounds the problem of insufficient electricity that has become intractable in many parts of the world. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "productivity"
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: material pursuit affects consumers negatively. 
    • Supporting idea: Today the youth’s perception of happiness has been also distorted in such way, which tempts them to commit wrong-doings to own the latest model of a necessity.
    • Example: For example, being obsessed and seduced by its fabulous model, people do not hesitate to purchase a new car without giving it a second thought. 

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• • Body 1:  Giải thích vì sao lại positive 
    • Main idea 1: These household goods can enhance the overall quality of life by providing convenience and comfort. 
      • Supporting idea: This allows individuals and families to spend more time on other activities, whether it's pursuing hobbies, spending time with loved ones, or simply relaxing.
      • Example: For example, microwaves and ovens make cooking faster and easier, saving time for other activities.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: Modern household appliances often consume less energy and water, contributing to energy efficiency and environmental sustainability.
      • Supporting idea: Manufacturers incorporate advanced technologies into appliances to minimize energy and water consumption. 
      • Example: For example, Energy Star-rated appliances use less energy and water while maintaining optimal performance.
  • Body 2: Giải thích vì sao lại negative 
    • Main idea 1: The production and disposal of household goods can have a significant environmental impact, contributing to pollution and electronic waste. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Supporting idea: Many of these items contain hazardous materials.
      • Example:  For instance, the production of electronic devices like smartphones and laptops requires the extraction of rare metals such as coltan and gold, which can result in habitat destruction and soil and water pollution near mining sites.
    • Main idea 2: Buying a range of household goods can lead to financial strain for some individuals or families, especially if they go into debt to acquire these items.
      • Supporting idea: Many household goods, such as appliances and electronics, can be expensive to purchase upfront. 
      • Example: For instance, buying a high-quality refrigerator, television, or kitchen appliances can require a substantial initial investment that may strain a family's budget.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In modern societies, household appliances such as televisions, ovens, and rice cookers have become ubiquitous (phổ biến khắp nơi / existing everywhere, widespread). While some claim that this trend reflects progress in living standards, I firmly believe it is a detrimental (gây hại / causing harm or damage) development.

One major reason is the heavy toll these products take on the environment. The more productivity (năng suất / the rate of producing goods or services) increases in manufacturing plants, the more industrial waste (chất thải công nghiệp / unwanted material from industry) they emit, contaminating air and water sources. Moreover, consumers who recklessly (liều lĩnh, thiếu thận trọng / without thinking about the consequences) discard still-usable televisions or refrigerators directly exacerbate (làm trầm trọng / to make a problem worse) the waste crisis. In addition, the rising use of fridges, ovens, and televisions exerts enormous strain (áp lực to lớn / great pressure or demand) on electricity grids. In regions already facing intractable (nan giải / hard to deal with or solve) shortages, such excessive consumption merely compounds the existing problem, deteriorating both energy sustainability and public health.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Another reason is that the materialistic mindset (lối suy nghĩ vật chất / focusing on material possessions) fostered by this trend distorts people’s values. Young people, in particular, often equate happiness with owning the latest models of household gadgets. This distorted perception (nhận thức sai lệch / an inaccurate view) of well-being not only diminishes genuine life satisfaction but also tempts (dụ dỗ / to attract or persuade someone to do something wrong) individuals into irresponsible financial decisions. For example, being obsessed with a brand-new luxury refrigerator, some consumers do not hesitate to buy it impulsively, plunging themselves into debt without giving it a second thought.

In conclusion, although the growing availability of household goods may seem like a marker of progress, it brings more harm than good due to its damaging environmental impacts and the unhealthy consumer mentality it fosters.

Vocabulary List

1. ubiquitous (phổ biến khắp nơi / existing everywhere, widespread)

   • Synonyms: omnipresent, universal, pervasive

   • Antonyms: rare, uncommon, scarce

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "household appliances... have become ubiquitous."

2. detrimental (gây hại / causing harm or damage)

   • Synonyms: harmful, damaging, injurious

   • Antonyms: beneficial, advantageous, helpful

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "I firmly believe it is a detrimental development."

3. productivity (năng suất / the rate of producing goods or services)

   • Synonyms: output, efficiency, performance

   • Antonyms: inefficiency, idleness, slowness

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "the more productivity increases in manufacturing plants…"

4. recklessly (liều lĩnh, thiếu thận trọng / without thinking about the consequences)

   • Synonyms: carelessly, thoughtlessly, irresponsibly

   • Antonyms: cautiously, prudently, carefully

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "consumers who recklessly discard still-usable televisions…"

5. exacerbate (làm trầm trọng / to make a problem worse)

   • Synonyms: worsen, aggravate, intensify

   • Antonyms: alleviate, mitigate, reduce

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "discard… directly exacerbate the waste crisis."

6. enormous strain (áp lực to lớn / great pressure or demand)

   • Synonyms: heavy pressure, intense burden, great stress

   • Antonyms: relief, ease, comfort

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "exerts enormous strain on electricity grids."

7. intractable (nan giải / hard to deal with or solve)

   • Synonyms: unmanageable, difficult, stubborn

   • Antonyms: manageable, solvable, simple

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "regions already facing intractable shortages…"

8. materialistic mindset (lối suy nghĩ vật chất / focusing on material possessions)

   • Synonyms: consumerist attitude, acquisitive mentality, money-oriented thinking

   • Antonyms: spiritual outlook, altruistic mindset, modest thinking

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "the materialistic mindset fostered by this trend…"

9. distorted perception (nhận thức sai lệch / an inaccurate view)

   • Synonyms: misconception, fallacy, misinterpretation

   • Antonyms: accurate understanding, clear perception, truth

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "This distorted perception of well-being…"

10. tempts (dụ dỗ / to attract or persuade someone to do something wrong)

• Synonyms: lures, entices, persuades

• Antonyms: discourages, dissuades, deters

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "also tempts individuals into irresponsible financial decisions."

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. The more …, the more …

   • "The more productivity increases in manufacturing plants, the more industrial waste they emit."

   • Cấu trúc so sánh kép → càng… thì càng…

   • Vietnamese: Càng tăng năng suất, các nhà máy càng thải ra nhiều chất thải.

2. Not only … but also … (implied in meaning)

   • "This distorted perception of well-being not only diminishes genuine life satisfaction but also tempts individuals into irresponsible financial decisions."

   • Vietnamese: Nhận thức sai lệch này không chỉ làm giảm sự hài lòng thực sự trong cuộc sống mà còn dụ dỗ con người đưa ra quyết định tài chính thiếu trách nhiệm.

3. Although clause for concession

   • "Although the growing availability of household goods may seem like a marker of progress, it brings more harm than good…"

   • Vietnamese: Mặc dù sự gia tăng của hàng hóa gia dụng có vẻ là dấu hiệu của sự tiến bộ, nhưng nó mang lại nhiều hại hơn lợi.

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