Phân tích essay "More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information. Therefore, there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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I. Đề bài

More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information. Therefore, there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

II. Từ vựng

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
      • Main idea: not everyone adapts to reading on electric devices (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Some groups of people tend to be reluctant to learn how to surf on the internet to search information)
        • Supporting idea:
          • The elderly have already become used to reading printed books, magazines and newspapers, which are the sources where they receive information. 
          • Another typical group should be those who are concerned with the radiation of computer screen when many people have to work with computer for several hours a day and want to read printed stories to reduce eyes imitation instead of keeping being exposed to screens >> If all the information is spread through electric device, people's eyesight will suffer more burdens. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "expose" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
      • Main idea: the access to internet has not equally bean spread all over the world.
        • Supporting idea:
          • This is because online service is only available in advanced countries and in some major cities of developing and poor countries.
          • For people who live in places without the Internet, traditional printed books are the predominant source of knowledge >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh
          • This is why many celebrities and charitable organizations mainly donate books to them instead of computers.
        • Example: For example, in some mountain areas in Vietnam, there are no signals for mobile phone, let alone downloading information. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng LET ALONE trong tiếng anh

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