Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu IELTS TUTOR partly agree với quan điểm này, tức là không phủ nhận positive effects của advertising nhiều nhưng mà negative effects của nó cũng không ít, thì ở introduction IELTS TUTOR phải khẳng định cho được ý trên. 
  • Mở bài mẫu:
    • Stepping into the 21st century, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the ongoing phenomenon that advertising is increasingly popular. In my view, this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures.
• Đến phần thân bài 1, IELTS TUTOR sẽ phân tích những mặt positive effects của advertising là gì và tại sao không hề sai khi the positive effects outweigh negative effects, when advertising gains popularity
  • Thân bài 1 mẫu
    • On one hand, the mushroomING/EXPONENTIAL growth of advertising can be seen as beneficial for personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, advertisements / COMMERCIALS / PIECES OF ADVERTISEMENTS / ADVERTS benefits BENEFIT consumers a lot, especially given that buyers can turn to advertising as a useful source of information. In fact, some advertisements might disclose detailed information about products like health hazards of overeating some types of food, enabling consumers to make more judicious buying decisions. From an economic perspective, advertising promotes consumerism, meaning that thanks to eye-catching advertisements, consumers tend to buy more products. This, in turn, gives a boost to the whole economy as a whole.

• Đến phần thân bài 2, IELTS TUTOR sẽ phân tích những điểm negative effects của advertising, và vì sao một phần nào đó không đồng ý hoàn toàn với câu statement của đề bài the positive effects outweigh negative effects, when advertising gains popularity
  • Thân bài 2 mẫu
    • On the other hand, the personal and economic arguments above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, consumers, particularly youngsters are easily susceptible to the effect of a commercialS when AS one of the initial purposes of advertising is to give products an exaggerated account. In other words, advertisers have a tendency to stress attributes of products that are likely to draw customers’ attention, while playING down THE side-effects. As a consequence, consumers are easily misled into making impulsive purchases when buying unnecessary things. Secondly, from the economic point of view, an THE increasing popularity of advertising can very well drive the economy to develop unsustainably, as only multinational companies with their loud/HUGE budget are capable of pouring millions of dollars into advertisements in (THE) hope of grabbing viewers’ attention. By contrast, there seems to be no way for disadvantaged enterprises to hook viewers, especially in the light that they are unable to advertise their products via the mass media, thereby pushing such companies into ONTO the verge of bankruptcy. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "in consequence, as a consequence" 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Stepping into the 21st century, people are increasingly bombarded (attacked constantly – bị tấn công dồn dập) with commercial messages in virtually every corner of daily life. In my view, this trend brings benefits and drawbacks in equal measures, rather than leaning entirely to one side.

On one hand, the burgeoning (growing rapidly – phát triển nhanh chóng) presence of advertising contributes positively to both individuals and the economy. For consumers, adverts act as a valuable informational conduit (useful channel – kênh thông tin hữu ích), helping them assess product quality, safety warnings, and potential risks. For instance, health-related promotions that highlight the detrimental (harmful – gây hại) effects of sugary drinks empower buyers to make more judicious (wise – sáng suốt) purchasing decisions. From a macroeconomic angle, advertising fuels heightened consumer demand (tăng nhu cầu tiêu dùng), which in turn stimulates production, job creation, and overall economic vibrancy. In this sense, the positive effects are undeniably compelling.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, these arguments can be viewed from an opposing perspective. A major concern is that many consumers, particularly impressionable youngsters, become susceptible (easily influenced – dễ bị ảnh hưởng) to overstated claims (quảng cáo thổi phồng – lời khẳng định phóng đại), as advertisers often highlight advantages while glossing over (ignore – bỏ qua) side-effects. Consequently, people may be driven into impulsive purchasing behaviour (hành vi mua sắm bốc đồng), acquiring unnecessary products. Economically, the dominance of advertising may create an uneven competitive landscape (sân chơi cạnh tranh không công bằng), where only corporations with formidable budgets (ngân sách khổng lồ) can saturate the media. Smaller firms, unable to keep up, may find themselves on the brink of bankruptcy (trên bờ vực phá sản), raising concerns about long-term economic sustainability.

In conclusion, while advertising unquestionably offers certain advantages, its downsides prevent it from being considered overwhelmingly positive.

NEW VOCAB LIST 

1. bombarded – bị tấn công dồn dập

Synonyms: assailed, overwhelmed, inundated
Antonyms: ignored, neglected, spared
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: People are increasingly bombarded with commercial messages.

2. burgeoning – phát triển nhanh chóng

Synonyms: expanding, escalating, proliferating
Antonyms: declining, diminishing, stagnating
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: the burgeoning presence of advertising

3. informational conduit – kênh thông tin hữu ích

Synonyms: channel, medium, pathway
Antonyms: obstruction, barrier, blockage
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: adverts act as a valuable informational conduit

4. detrimental – gây hại

Synonyms: harmful, damaging, adverse
Antonyms: beneficial, advantageous, helpful
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: the detrimental effects of sugary drinks

5. judicious – sáng suốt

Synonyms: wise, prudent, sensible
Antonyms: reckless, unwise, imprudent
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: make more judicious decisions

6. susceptible – dễ bị ảnh hưởng

Synonyms: vulnerable, impressionable, sensitive
Antonyms: resistant, immune, unaffected
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: youngsters are easily susceptible to overstated claims.

7. gloss over – bỏ qua

Synonyms: ignore, conceal, downplay
Antonyms: highlight, emphasize, reveal
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: advertisers often gloss over side-effects.

8. formidable budgets – ngân sách khổng lồ

Synonyms: massive, substantial, immense
Antonyms: modest, limited, meagre
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: only corporations with formidable budgets can saturate the media.

9. on the brink of bankruptcy – trên bờ vực phá sản

Synonyms: near collapse, nearing failure, at risk
Antonyms: financially stable, profitable, flourishing
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: small firms may be on the brink of bankruptcy.

DIFFICULT GRAMMAR STRUCTURES

1. "In my view, this trend brings benefits and drawbacks in equal measures."

• Cấu trúc nâng cao: balanced clause with parallel noun phrases

• Giải thích: Diễn đạt lập trường một cách trang trọng

• Bản đơn giản: I think this trend has both good and bad effects.

2. "adverts act as a valuable informational conduit"

• Cấu trúc: “act as” + noun phrase

• Giải thích: Dùng cấu trúc mang tính học thuật thay vì “are”

• Đơn giản: adverts are a useful source of information.

3. "these arguments can be viewed from an opposing perspective"

• Cấu trúc: passive + prepositional phrase

• Giải thích: Mang tính học thuật, khách quan

• Đơn giản: we can also look at these arguments in another way.

4. "people may be driven into impulsive purchasing behaviour"

• Cấu trúc: passive causative

• Giải thích: nhấn mạnh tác động gián tiếp

• Đơn giản: people may buy things impulsively.

5. "its downsides prevent it from being considered overwhelmingly positive"

• Cấu trúc: prevent + object + from + V-ing

• Giải thích: chỉ ra sự cản trở

• Đơn giản: the disadvantages stop it from being seen as totally good.

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