Phân tích "Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believes that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 22/3/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believes that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 22/3/2023)

Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believes that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others believes that it is better to get a job straight after school
    • Main idea 1: Work experience is equally important as formal education. 
      • Supporting idea: Many successful entrepreneurs and business people did not attend university or college but instead gained valuable skills and knowledge on the job.
      • Example: Richard Branson, the founder of the Virgin Group, is an example of a successful entrepreneur who did not attend university or college and instead started his first business, a magazine called Student, at the age of 16, followed by a record store, a recording studio, and eventually the Virgin brand, which now includes over 400 companies.
    • Main idea 2: Entering the workforce immediately after high school can provide individuals with the opportunity to start earning money and gaining work experience earlier.
      • Supporting idea: This provides individuals with the opportunity to gain practical, hands-on experience in a professional environment, which can be valuable in developing job-specific skills and learning how to work effectively in a team >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "valuable / invaluable / valueless" tiếng anh
      • Example: Taking a job as a sales associate in a retail store, a high school graduate may gain practical skills in customer interaction, cash handling, and inventory management, leading to promotions to supervisory roles and acquiring leadership skills, which can be just as valuable, if not more so, than a formal education in some fields.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Higher education provides individuals with knowledge and skills that are essential in the job market. 
      • Supporting idea: University or college graduates may have a deeper understanding of their field of study and may be more qualified for specialized jobs. 
      • Example: An example of how university or college graduates may be more qualified for specialized jobs is a graduate with a degree in engineering who has undergone a rigorous and comprehensive curriculum, including hands-on training in laboratories and workshops, and has developed critical thinking and problem-solving skills that are essential for a career in engineering.
    • Main idea 2: Many employers require a degree as a minimum qualification for certain positions, and higher education can also provide access to valuable networking opportunities.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Higher education can provide access to valuable networking opportunities, including internships, mentorship programs, and career fairs. 
        • These opportunities can be important for building professional connections and gaining exposure to different industries and career paths.
      • Example: For example, in order to become a licensed physician, a medical degree from an accredited university or college is required, as well as completion of a residency program. Similarly, to practice law, a law degree from an accredited institution is required, as well as passing the bar exam >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng AS WELL AS và AS WELL trong tiếng anh 

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