Bên cạnh Phân tích đề thi "spend their leisure time with their colleagues"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi máy 23/4/2022)
I. Đề bài
Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
- Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages > disadvantages)
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
- Main idea: (Viết về accommodation) This policy can ease the housing shortage in big cities resulting from overpopulation. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "population" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Large areas of land which are released due to the movement of companies could pave the way for the construction of more residential areas. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "pave the way for something" tiếng anh
- This will lead to the fall of housing prices and more people will have the chance to settle in urban areas.
- Example: In Tokyo, many companies have moved their headquarters to suburban areas, freeing up substantial amounts of land in the city center. This land has been repurposed for residential developments, creating new housing options for city dwellers. This strategy has helped alleviate the housing crisis by increasing the availability of affordable housing in the city center.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
- Main idea: (Viết về transport problems) Moving firms to rural areas can contribute to resolving the pressing problem of traffic congestions in metropolitan areas. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "rural" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: The huge influx of commuters into the city every rush hour would be reduced as many of these people would now be travelling to their relocated jobs. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ "reduce" tiếng anh
- Example: In Japan, the government has implemented policies to encourage businesses to move from Tokyo to rural areas to alleviate severe traffic congestion by reducing the number of daily commuters, resulting in companies like Fujitsu establishing offices in smaller cities like Fukushima, where employees now travel shorter distances to their new workplaces, noticeably decreasing traffic volume during peak hours in the capital.
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
- Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé)
- Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "trend" tiếng anh
- Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages
- Main idea 1: This policy can ease the housing shortage in big cities resulting from overpopulation.
- Supporting idea: Large areas of land which are released due to the movement of companies could pave the way for the construction of more residential areas. This will lead to the fall of housing prices and more people will have the chance to settle in urban areas. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "residential" tiếng anh
- Example: In Tokyo, many companies have moved their headquarters to suburban areas, freeing up substantial amounts of land in the city center. This land has been repurposed for residential developments, creating new housing options for city dwellers. This strategy has helped alleviate the housing crisis by increasing the availability of affordable housing in the city center.
- Main idea 2: Moving firms to rural areas can contribute to resolving the pressing problem of traffic congestions in metropolitan areas. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích: Contribute to sth
- Supporting idea: The huge influx of commuters into the city every rush hour would be reduced as many of these people would now be travelling to their relocated jobs. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "many" tiếng anh
- Example: In Japan, the government has implemented policies to encourage businesses to move from Tokyo to rural areas to alleviate severe traffic congestion by reducing the number of daily commuters, resulting in companies like Fujitsu establishing offices in smaller cities like Fukushima, where employees now travel shorter distances to their new workplaces, noticeably decreasing traffic volume during peak hours in the capital.
- Main idea 1: This policy can ease the housing shortage in big cities resulting from overpopulation.
- Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages
- Main idea 1: skilled workers are a rarity in rural areas
- Supporting idea: Most people living in small towns and villages do not receive sufficient education to undertake intellectual jobs. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "sufficient" tiếng anh
- Example: In many rural areas of India, such as the village of Gagret in Himachal Pradesh where education is limited to the 10th grade and there are no nearby colleges or vocational training centers, the lack of educational opportunities forces a significant portion of the population to engage in agricultural work
- Main idea 2: businesses will have a lot of costs to build their project again, so there are chances that companies will not make a profit sometimes, thereby giving their rivals a great chance to dominate the market.
- Supporting idea: These companies will have to spend a huge amount of money rebuilding their premises. Based in regional areas, companies risk distancing themselves further from their customers, their suppliers and other partners in their business transactions, which can weaken their profitability. Their competitiveness may be adversely affected. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form "profitable" tiếng anh - luyenthidaihoctienganhonlin
- Main idea 1: skilled workers are a rarity in rural areas
- Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages > disadvantages)
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
In many major metropolitan areas, accommodation and transport issues have become increasingly severe, prompting governments to encourage companies to relocate to the countryside. This essay argues that the advantages of this shift overwhelmingly outweigh its drawbacks.
One major advantage is that relocating businesses can significantly alleviate the housing shortage in overcrowded cities. When large firms move away, vast tracts of urban land are freed up, paving the way for (paving the way for – mở đường cho – to create conditions for) new high-density residential complexes (high-density residential complexes – khu nhà ở mật độ cao – housing developments with many units in a compact area). This not only expands the housing supply but also drives down property prices, enabling more residents to secure affordable homes. For instance, in Tokyo, the decentralisation of corporate headquarters has enabled underused commercial zones to be repurposed into modern housing blocks, helping to ease the long-standing accommodation crisis.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Another compelling benefit is the reduction of traffic congestion in major cities. As companies relocate, the daily influx of commuters (influx of commuters – dòng người đi làm đổ về – large number of people traveling to work) is reduced, which directly decreases pressure on urban transport networks. Many employees will travel to less crowded rural workplaces instead of converging on the city centre during peak hours. A notable example can be seen in Japan, where incentives for firms to establish offices in rural prefectures have led to a marked decline in (marked decline in – sự giảm đáng kể – a noticeable reduction) rush-hour congestion in Tokyo.
In conclusion, although this policy may pose certain challenges, the benefits it offers in terms of improved housing availability and reduced traffic far outweigh the disadvantages.
New Vocabulary List
1. Paving the way for – mở đường cho – to create conditions for
Synonyms: facilitating, enabling, preparing the ground for
Antonyms: hindering, obstructing, impeding
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: When large firms move away, vast tracts of land are freed up, paving the way for new high-density residential complexes.
2. High-density residential complexes – khu nhà ở mật độ cao – housing built with many units in a small area
Synonyms: apartment clusters, compact housing blocks, multi-unit residences
Antonyms: low-density housing, scattered dwellings, single-unit homes
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …paving the way for new high-density residential complexes.
3. Influx of commuters – dòng người đi làm đổ về – large numbers of workers moving into a city
Synonyms: surge of workers, flow of employees, stream of commuters
Antonyms: outflow, decline in commuters, dwindling numbers
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …the daily influx of commuters is reduced.
4. Marked decline in – sự giảm đáng kể – a noticeable reduction
Synonyms: significant drop, substantial fall, sharp decrease
Antonyms: increase, surge, escalation
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …has led to a marked decline in rush-hour congestion.
Difficult Grammar Structures
1. “This essay argues that the advantages … outweigh its drawbacks.”
Structure: that-clause used as a noun clause after a reporting verb
Vietnamese: Mệnh đề “that” được dùng như tân ngữ sau động từ “argue”.
Simple version: This essay says the advantages are greater than the disadvantages.
2. “When large firms move away, vast tracts of urban land are freed up, paving the way for…”
Structure: non-finite –ing clause of result (rút gọn mệnh đề)
Vietnamese: Mệnh đề rút gọn dùng “paving” để chỉ kết quả của hành động trước.
Simple version: When companies move, land becomes available and this creates chances for new housing.
3. “Although this policy may pose certain challenges, the benefits… far outweigh the disadvantages.”
Structure: complex sentence with concession clause using “although”
Vietnamese: Câu phức với mệnh đề nhượng bộ.
Simple version: This policy has some problems, but the benefits are greater.
📩 MN AI CHƯA CÓ ĐÁP ÁN FORECAST QUÝ MỚI PART 1-2-3 NHẮN ZL 0905834420 IELTS TUTOR GỬI FREE HẾT NHA
Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0 - Đảm bảo đầu ra - Thi không đạt, học lại FREE
>> Thành tích học sinh IELTS TUTOR với hàng ngàn feedback được cập nhật hàng ngày