Phân tích "As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are the problems for young people living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are the solutions to these problems? "IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 26/8/2022)

· Đề thi IELTS thật,Task 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are the problems for young people living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are the solutions to these problems? "IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 26/8/2022)

I. Đề bài

As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are the problems for young people living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are the solutions to these problems?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng 2 question phân bố bố cục 2 đoạn thân bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth?
      • Main idea 1: The most serious is the difficulty young people face to get employed in the competitive job market of a growing city (hoặc it is not easy for young inhabitants to find jobs)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ "difficult" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea 1: 
        • Example 1: fast-growing cities like HCMC or Ha Noi have induced thousands of rural people to migrate to urban areas for better career opportunities, forcing a great number of inexperienced job applicants to remain unemployed  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "fill" tiếng anh
      • Main idea 2: the high cost of living in thriving cities has placed a great financial burden on young urban citizens whose salaries are often insufficient to cover all of their living expenses including accommodation, food and services, and this might prevent them from enjoying their lives.
        • Supporting idea 2:
        • Example 2:
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi What are solutions for these problems?
      • Main idea 1: The government can provide subsidies to companies that are willing to hire young people (hoặc The best way to tackle this problem  for the government to provide policies aimed at assisting youths to gain employment)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "provide" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea 1: These subsidies will make it more attractive for companies to hire young people and this will allow them to get experience so that they will be more employable in the future.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  VỊ TRÍ & CHỨC NĂNG TÍNH TỪ TIẾNG ANH
        • Example 1:
      • Main idea 2: Another measure would be to give a reasonable interest rate to young urban people to sustain their lives and continue to grow personally and professionally.(giving a loans with a low interest rate to young urban residents)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "town" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea 2:
        • Example 2:

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