Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề Phân tích đề"The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process" IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. ĐỀ BÀI
The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
II. KIẾN THỨC LIÊN QUAN
III. PHÂN TÍCH
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Với 2 hình thì cứ chia theo bố cục mỗi hình một đoạn thân bài, chia bố cục như sau:
- Overall: mô tả sơ qua mỗi hình có bao nhiêu bước (There are five stages in the production of cement, beginning with the input of raw materials and ending with bags of the finished product. To produce concrete, four different materials are mixed together)
- Body 1: viết hình số 1 (cement production)
- limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder.
- This powder is then mixed before it passes into a rotating heater.
- After heating, the resulting mixture is ground, and cement is produced.
- The cement is packaged in large bags.
- Body 2: viết hình số 2 (concrete production)
- Cement is one of the four raw materials that are used in the production of concrete, along with gravel, sand and water (concrete consists of 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% cement and 10% water)
- All four materials are blended together in a rotating machine called a concrete mixer
IV. Sửa bài viết HS IELTS TUTOR