Phân tích"Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier .However many ealderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

· Task 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier .However many ealderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier. However many ealderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn TỪ VỰNG TOPIC SPORTS IELTS

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: Viết về cause 
    • Main idea 1: (Viết về suffering from loneliness)  the rising popularity of nuclear families
      • Supporting idea:
        • people are more inclined towards single family concept instead of living in a joint family. 
        • Young generation does not hesitate to abandon their parents or grandparents in a village to lead a better life in metropolitan cities  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Their children have migrated to cities in search of better employment)
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: (Viết về lack of fitness) older adults not active due to discomfort and pain
      • Supporting idea:
        • Back pain, sore knees, heart conditions, and lung disorder can be barriers to exercise and limit motivation.
        • Overweight and obesity can be major problems in influencing healthy activity in older adult
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: : Viết về solution
    • Main idea 1: spend time and get along with others (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the older generation people can join local clubs with their peers and friends to reduce loneliness)
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: old people should speak with their health care provider about the discomfort and symptoms
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The old age people should join gymnasium and yoga classes , and also they should work and do some calisthenics to remain fit and healthy.
        • Discomfort and pain can be managed through medication and alleviated with physical therapy
        • Chronic conditions, such as heart disease, arthritis, and diabetes can benefit from low exertion exercise and flexibility training. >> Ngoài ra IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng SUCH AS trong tiếng anh
      • Example: In many cases of discomfort, elderly exercise options like water aerobics is a good option to lessen joint impact.

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