Phân tích "Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers. Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích & Sửa đề"Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers. Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers. Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Prolonged use of mobile devices for entertainment purposes can contribute to health issues such as eyestrain, poor posture, and screen addiction. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Supporting idea: These concerns are particularly relevant for younger users.
      • Example: A study published in the journal "Optometry and Vision Science" found that people who use their mobile devices for more than two hours a day are more likely to experience eyestrain than those who use them for less than one hour a day. The study also found that the risk of eyestrain increases with the brightness of the screen.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Excessive use of mobile devices for entertainment can lead to social isolation, as individuals might become engrossed in their screens and neglect face-to-face interactions.
      • Supporting idea: This distraction can make them seem disinterested in the people and activities happening in their immediate environment.
      • Example: A study by the Pew Research Center found that 69% of teens say they have experienced social media fatigue, which is the feeling of being overwhelmed or exhausted by social media.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: One of the significant advantages is the convenience and accessibility it offers. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Users can enjoy films and games anytime, anywhere, without being tied to a specific location or time. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
          • This flexibility is especially useful for those with busy schedules or during travel.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Mobile access provides a wide variety of films and games to choose from. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Users can explore different genres and styles, catering to their individual preferences. 
          • This diversity enhances the overall entertainment experience.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Prolonged use of mobile devices for entertainment purposes can contribute to health issues such as eyestrain, poor posture, and screen addiction. 
        • Supporting idea: These concerns are particularly relevant for younger users.
        • Example: A study published in the journal "Optometry and Vision Science" found that people who use their mobile devices for more than two hours a day are more likely to experience eyestrain than those who use them for less than one hour a day. The study also found that the risk of eyestrain increases with the brightness of the screen.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Cách dùng danh từ "publication" tiếng anh
      • Main idea 2: Excessive use of mobile devices for entertainment can lead to social isolation, as individuals might become engrossed in their screens and neglect face-to-face interactions.
        • Supporting idea: This distraction can make them seem disinterested in the people and activities happening in their immediate environment.
        • Example: A study by the Pew Research Center found that 69% of teens say they have experienced social media fatigue, which is the feeling of being overwhelmed or exhausted by social media.

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