Phân tích "Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers. Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích & Sửa đề"Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers. Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers. Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Prolonged use of mobile devices for entertainment purposes can contribute to health issues such as eyestrain, poor posture, and screen addiction. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Supporting idea: These concerns are particularly relevant for younger users.
      • Example: A study published in the journal "Optometry and Vision Science" found that people who use their mobile devices for more than two hours a day are more likely to experience eyestrain than those who use them for less than one hour a day. The study also found that the risk of eyestrain increases with the brightness of the screen.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Excessive use of mobile devices for entertainment can lead to social isolation, as individuals might become engrossed in their screens and neglect face-to-face interactions.
      • Supporting idea: This distraction can make them seem disinterested in the people and activities happening in their immediate environment.
      • Example: A study by the Pew Research Center found that 69% of teens say they have experienced social media fatigue, which is the feeling of being overwhelmed or exhausted by social media.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: One of the significant advantages is the convenience and accessibility it offers. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Users can enjoy films and games anytime, anywhere, without being tied to a specific location or time. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
          • This flexibility is especially useful for those with busy schedules or during travel.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Mobile access provides a wide variety of films and games to choose from. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Users can explore different genres and styles, catering to their individual preferences. 
          • This diversity enhances the overall entertainment experience.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Prolonged use of mobile devices for entertainment purposes can contribute to health issues such as eyestrain, poor posture, and screen addiction. 
        • Supporting idea: These concerns are particularly relevant for younger users.
        • Example: A study published in the journal "Optometry and Vision Science" found that people who use their mobile devices for more than two hours a day are more likely to experience eyestrain than those who use them for less than one hour a day. The study also found that the risk of eyestrain increases with the brightness of the screen.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Cách dùng danh từ "publication" tiếng anh
      • Main idea 2: Excessive use of mobile devices for entertainment can lead to social isolation, as individuals might become engrossed in their screens and neglect face-to-face interactions.
        • Supporting idea: This distraction can make them seem disinterested in the people and activities happening in their immediate environment.
        • Example: A study by the Pew Research Center found that 69% of teens say they have experienced social media fatigue, which is the feeling of being overwhelmed or exhausted by social media.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In recent years, films and games have become increasingly accessible on portable devices such as smartphones, tablets, and laptops. I do believe that this technological leap (bước tiến công nghệ lớn – a major advance in technology) could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measures.

On the one hand, the ability to watch films and play games anytime on portable gadgets such as smartphones, tablets, and laptops brings several advantages. One of the most obvious benefits is the unparalleled convenience (sự tiện lợi không gì sánh được – the highest level of ease and comfort) and accessibility these devices offer. In fact, people can enjoy their favorite films or games anytime and anywhere, without being restricted to a particular place or time. This on-demand availability (khả năng có sẵn ngay lập tức – access whenever needed) is particularly useful for those with hectic schedules or frequent travel commitments, as entertainment becomes a source of relaxation during breaks. In addition, mobile platforms provide access to a bewildering variety (sự đa dạng gây choáng ngợp – an extremely large and confusing range) of films and games. As a matter of fact, users are exposed to multiple genres and formats, ensuring that individual preferences are well catered for. This diversity, in turn, enriches their overall entertainment experience, making leisure more personalized and engaging.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

On the other hand, such convenience is not without drawbacks. Firstly, prolonged exposure to screens can cause health-related problems, including eyestrain, back pain, and even screen-induced addiction (nghiện do màn hình gây ra – dependency created by excessive screen use). Indeed, these risks are particularly alarming for younger audiences, who are more vulnerable to unhealthy digital habits. For instance, a publication in Optometry and Vision Science revealed that individuals using mobile devices for over two hours daily are far more prone to vision problems than lighter users. Another pressing issue is social isolation. It is undeniable that individuals often become so absorbed in (bị cuốn hút vào – deeply involved in) their virtual experiences that they neglect face-to-face communication. The Pew Research Center reported that nearly 70% of teenagers experience digital fatigue (sự mệt mỏi vì kỹ thuật số – exhaustion caused by digital overuse), reflecting their sense of being overwhelmed by constant screen engagement.

In conclusion, I am of the opinion that this development could be considered a double-edged sword whose positive and negative aspects exist in equal measure.

New Vocabulary with Explanation

1. technological leap = bước tiến công nghệ lớn (major advance in technology)

   • Synonyms: technological breakthrough, innovation, advancement

   • Antonyms: stagnation, setback, decline

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “While this technological leap could have positive and negative consequences...”

2. unparalleled convenience = sự tiện lợi không gì sánh được (the highest level of ease and comfort)

   • Synonyms: exceptional comfort, unmatched ease, unequaled accessibility

   • Antonyms: inconvenience, hardship, difficulty

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “One of the most obvious benefits is the unparalleled convenience and accessibility...”

3. on-demand availability = khả năng có sẵn ngay lập tức (access whenever needed)

   • Synonyms: instant access, immediate availability, ready supply

   • Antonyms: limited access, restricted supply, delay

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “This on-demand availability is particularly useful...”

4. bewildering variety = sự đa dạng gây choáng ngợp (an extremely large and confusing range)

   • Synonyms: vast assortment, extensive range, wide diversity

   • Antonyms: scarcity, uniformity, limitation

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Mobile platforms provide access to a bewildering variety of films and games...”

5. screen-induced addiction = nghiện do màn hình gây ra (dependency created by excessive screen use)

   • Synonyms: digital addiction, device dependency, compulsive screen use

   • Antonyms: self-control, moderation, detachment

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...including eyestrain, back pain, and even screen-induced addiction.”

6. absorbed in = bị cuốn hút vào (deeply involved in)

   • Synonyms: engrossed in, captivated by, immersed in

   • Antonyms: distracted from, indifferent to, detached from

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “People often become so absorbed in their virtual experiences...”

7. digital fatigue = sự mệt mỏi vì kỹ thuật số (exhaustion caused by digital overuse)

   • Synonyms: screen fatigue, online exhaustion, technological burnout

   • Antonyms: refreshment, vitality, energy

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Nearly 70% of teenagers experience digital fatigue...”

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. “While this technological leap could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures, it is undeniable that its influence permeates daily life.”

   • Complex sentence with a concessive clause “while…”

   • Vietnamese: “Mặc dù bước tiến công nghệ này có thể mang lại cả hậu quả tích cực lẫn tiêu cực ở mức độ ngang nhau, nhưng không thể phủ nhận rằng ảnh hưởng của nó lan tỏa vào đời sống hằng ngày.”

2. “This on-demand availability is particularly useful for those with hectic schedules or frequent travel commitments, as entertainment becomes a source of relaxation during breaks.”

   • Use of “as” to show cause-effect.

   • Vietnamese: “Khả năng có sẵn ngay lập tức này đặc biệt hữu ích cho những người có lịch trình bận rộn hoặc thường xuyên di chuyển, vì giải trí trở thành nguồn thư giãn trong những khoảng nghỉ.”

3. “People often become so absorbed in their virtual experiences that they neglect face-to-face communication.”

   • “so…that” structure expressing consequence.

   • Vietnamese: “Mọi người thường bị cuốn hút đến mức vào các trải nghiệm ảo mà họ bỏ bê giao tiếp trực tiếp.”

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