Phân tích"In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài viết được sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Western clothing has become widely known for the recent advent of the mass media like TV or global newspapers.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The global nature of media, particularly with the rise of the internet and social media, has also accelerated this process)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  PHÂN BIỆT "RISE / RAISE / ARISE" TIẾNG ANH
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Most people watch and listen to western movies and music and are subconsciously influenced by western fashion.
        • Media showcase adorable aspects of western style, which reaches a wider population than in the past because of technological advancements
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    • Main idea 2: it is possible to efficiently transport vast quantities of goods by air, land, and sea.
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  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: This choice of fashion could do both harm and good
    • Main idea 1: On the positive side, it helps people integrate into the global working environment, which is essential in the age of globalization where different cultures cross.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Ideas & Từ vựng topic "TOÀN CẦU HOÁ - GLOBALIZATION" 
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    • Main idea 2: On the other hand, if such preference became excessively prevalent, there would be a good reason for the worry of cultural assimilation. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • There are thousands of traditional styles of fashion around the world that have now been subsumed into a limited range of western aesthetic preferences
        • Each culture has its own identity, and this identity is usually reflected by its dressing style and the customs.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "identity" tiếng anh
      • Example: Some people, the young generation in particular, might underestimate the value and meaning of their traditional clothes, the Ao Dai in Vietnam for example.

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