Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Western clothing has become widely known for the recent advent of the mass media like TV or global newspapers.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The global nature of media, particularly with the rise of the internet and social media, has also accelerated this process)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  PHÂN BIỆT "RISE / RAISE / ARISE" TIẾNG ANH
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Most people watch and listen to western movies and music and are subconsciously influenced by western fashion.
        • Media showcase adorable aspects of western style, which reaches a wider population than in the past because of technological advancements
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    • Main idea 2: it is possible to efficiently transport vast quantities of goods by air, land, and sea.
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  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: This choice of fashion could do both harm and good
    • Main idea 1: On the positive side, it helps people integrate into the global working environment, which is essential in the age of globalization where different cultures cross.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Ideas & Từ vựng topic "TOÀN CẦU HOÁ - GLOBALIZATION" 
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    • Main idea 2: On the other hand, if such preference became excessively prevalent, there would be a good reason for the worry of cultural assimilation. 
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        • There are thousands of traditional styles of fashion around the world that have now been subsumed into a limited range of western aesthetic preferences
        • Each culture has its own identity, and this identity is usually reflected by its dressing style and the customs.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "identity" tiếng anh
      • Example: Some people, the young generation in particular, might underestimate the value and meaning of their traditional clothes, the Ao Dai in Vietnam for example.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Introduction
In recent decades, Western-style clothing has gained remarkable prominence across the world, replacing traditional garments in many societies. This phenomenon can largely be explained by technological and cultural forces, and it brings both advantages and disadvantages.

One major reason for the adoption of Western fashion is the bold “global media penetration – sự thâm nhập rộng rãi của truyền thông toàn cầu – wide spread influence of international media”, which exposes people to Western culture on a daily basis. The global nature of mass media, especially the Internet and social networking sites, promotes Western movies, music, and celebrities whose dressing styles subtly shape public taste. As a result, individuals become bold “subconsciously susceptible – dễ bị ảnh hưởng một cách vô thức – easily influenced without awareness” to Western fashion norms. Another key factor is the bold “high-capacity transportation system – hệ thống vận chuyển công suất lớn – infrastructure that enables moving goods in large volumes”, which makes it possible to distribute enormous quantities of Western garments by air, land, and sea. This logistical efficiency allows Western clothing brands to dominate stores worldwide, making such fashion more accessible and affordable than ever.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
This trend brings both positive and negative consequences. On the positive side, choosing Western attire helps individuals integrate into an increasingly bold “cross-cultural workplace – môi trường làm việc đa văn hoá – professional setting involving people from different cultures”, which is vital in the era of globalization. Western business clothes, such as suits, provide a neutral and universally accepted look that facilitates professional communication. However, this shift may also lead to bold “cultural assimilation – sự đồng hoá văn hoá – process of losing cultural identity through absorption into another culture”, especially when Western fashion becomes overwhelmingly dominant. Many traditional styles have been overshadowed by a narrow Western aesthetic, diminishing cultural uniqueness. Young generations, for example, may underestimate the symbolism of their traditional attire, such as the Ao Dai in Vietnam.

In conclusion, although the popularity of Western clothing enhances global integration, it also poses significant risks to cultural diversity.

⭐ New Vocabulary List 

1. global media penetration

• VN: sự thâm nhập rộng rãi của truyền thông toàn cầu

• EN: widespread influence of international media
  IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Western fashion spreads quickly due to global media penetration.

Synonyms: media expansion, international media reach, global broadcast influence
Antonyms: media isolation, cultural insulation, restricted communication

2. subconsciously susceptible

• VN: dễ bị ảnh hưởng một cách vô thức

• EN: easily influenced without awareness
  IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Many viewers become subconsciously susceptible to Western fashion norms.

Synonyms: unawarely influenced, mentally impressionable, unconsciously affected
Antonyms: mentally resistant, consciously aware, unaffected

3. high-capacity transportation system

• VN: hệ thống vận chuyển công suất lớn

• EN: infrastructure that moves goods in large quantities
  IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: A high-capacity transportation system allows Western clothes to be shipped globally.

Synonyms: large-scale logistics network, advanced transport infrastructure, mass-distribution system
Antonyms: limited transport system, low-volume logistics, inefficient distribution network

4. cross-cultural workplace

• VN: môi trường làm việc đa văn hoá

• EN: professional setting with people from many cultures
  IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Western clothing helps people adapt to a cross-cultural workplace.

Synonyms: multicultural office, international work environment, globally integrated workplace
Antonyms: mono-cultural workplace, isolated work setting, domestically confined environment

5. cultural assimilation

• VN: sự đồng hoá văn hoá

• EN: loss of cultural identity by adopting another culture
  IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Excessive Western fashion influence may result in cultural assimilation.

Synonyms: cultural absorption, cultural blending, cultural integration (deep)
Antonyms: cultural preservation, cultural distinction, cultural separation

⭐ Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Reduced relative clause

• Original: Western-style clothing has gained remarkable prominence across the world, replacing traditional garments.

• Explanation: “Replacing” = reduced relative clause (which replaces).

• VN: Mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn.

2. Complex sentence with participle clause

• Sentence: Exposing people to Western culture on a daily basis, global media strongly shapes public taste.

• VN: Mệnh đề phân từ diễn tả nguyên nhân.

3. Conditional sentence (type 2)

• Sentence: If Western fashion became excessively prevalent, cultural assimilation would be a major concern.

• VN: Câu điều kiện loại 2 diễn tả giả định.

4. Nominalization

• Sentence: This phenomenon can be explained by technological and cultural forces.

• VN: “Phenomenon”, “forces”: danh hoá ý tưởng → văn học thuật hơn.

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