Phân tích "In many countries today, people buy a range of household goods ( television, microwave, oven and rick cookers) Is it a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many countries today, people buy a range of household goods (television, microwave, oven and rick cookers). Is it a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In many countries today, people buy a range of household goods ( television, microwave, oven and rick cookers) Is it a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng NEGATIVE):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: the greater productivity is the more industrial waste that manufacturing plants release to the environment.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "productivity" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea:
      • Consumers who dump cars or TV sets which are still in use should be to blame for.
      • The use of cars is often held responsible for environmental pollution because exhaust emissions from automobiles impair the air quality and consequently affect people’s health.
      • Using fridges and televisions also places pressure on electricity supply in the world when the growing use of these devices in the home merely compounds the problem of insufficient electricity that has become intractable in many parts of the world. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "productivity"
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: material pursuit affects consumers negatively. 
    • Supporting idea: Today the youth’s perception of happiness has been also distorted in such way, which tempts them to commit wrong-doings to own the latest model of a necessity.
    • Example: For example, being obsessed and seduced by its fabulous model, people do not hesitate to purchase a new car without giving it a second thought. 

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• • Body 1:  Giải thích vì sao lại positive 
    • Main idea 1: These household goods can enhance the overall quality of life by providing convenience and comfort. 
      • Supporting idea: This allows individuals and families to spend more time on other activities, whether it's pursuing hobbies, spending time with loved ones, or simply relaxing.
      • Example: For example, microwaves and ovens make cooking faster and easier, saving time for other activities.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: Modern household appliances often consume less energy and water, contributing to energy efficiency and environmental sustainability.
      • Supporting idea: Manufacturers incorporate advanced technologies into appliances to minimize energy and water consumption. 
      • Example: For example, Energy Star-rated appliances use less energy and water while maintaining optimal performance.
  • Body 2: Giải thích vì sao lại negative 
    • Main idea 1: The production and disposal of household goods can have a significant environmental impact, contributing to pollution and electronic waste. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Supporting idea: Many of these items contain hazardous materials.
      • Example:  For instance, the production of electronic devices like smartphones and laptops requires the extraction of rare metals such as coltan and gold, which can result in habitat destruction and soil and water pollution near mining sites.
    • Main idea 2: Buying a range of household goods can lead to financial strain for some individuals or families, especially if they go into debt to acquire these items.
      • Supporting idea: Many household goods, such as appliances and electronics, can be expensive to purchase upfront. 
      • Example: For instance, buying a high-quality refrigerator, television, or kitchen appliances can require a substantial initial investment that may strain a family's budget.

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