Phân tích "In some cities, public parks and open spaces are changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 20/8/2022 (computer-based))

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some cities, public parks and open spaces are changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 20/8/2022 (computer-based)).

In some cities, public parks and open spaces are changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: access to green space is essential for human happiness, and this is especially important in crowded cities >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "HUMAN" & "HUMANS" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Parks offer people an escape from crowds and traffic which is beneficial to individuals’ health as well as to the well-being of a community.
        • Most modern cities are congested and people living in these urban places consider open spaces and parks as a second home. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "CONSIDER" tiếng anh 
        • While children utilize this spaces for play, older adults relax in these places. 
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: providing a place for people to relax, local parks can be used to generate revenue in several ways. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "generate" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
        • Cities can use their parks to sponsor events such as art fairs and music festivals and allow local shops and restaurants to sell their goods during the events.
        • City governments could also establish community gardens in their parks and rent individual plots to local residents. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "local" tiếng anh 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "negative" tiếng anh 
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1:
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: access to green space is essential for human happiness, and this is especially important in crowded cities.
        • Supporting idea: Parks offer people an escape from crowds and traffic which is beneficial to individuals’ health as well as to the well-being of a community.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: providing a place for people to relax, local parks can be used to generate revenue in several ways. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase "RELAX" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
          • Cities can use their parks to sponsor events such as art fairs and music festivals and allow local shops and restaurants to sell their goods during the events.
          • City governments could also establish community gardens in their parks and rent individual plots to local residents. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "establish"

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