Phân tích"In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa) (IELTS Academic – 23/01/2021)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (IELTS Academic – 23/01/2021)

In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (IELTS Academic – 23/01/2021)

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: those who refuse to live on their own are more likely to experience a prolonged period of immaturity
      • Supporting idea:
        • Those who remain at home are usually exempt from mundane tasks such as preparing meals, doing laundry and tidying their rooms. Consequently, they are likely to be dependent on their parents and have trouble developing the capacity for self-reliance that is essential for personal and career success.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng thường dùng topic Tidiness IELTS 
        • It will be more difficult for them to make their own well-informed, responsible decisions.
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea:  the autonomy and self-efficacy of youngsters can also diminish
      • Supporting idea:
        • Being with overprotective parents can deprive adults of the development of problem-solving and decision-making skills.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "away" tiếng anh
        • Compared to other counterparts, they are less confident when choosing between different options.
      • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "instead" & "instead of" tiếng anh
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: staying under the same roof can help forge stronger bonds between family members
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: For example, a newly graduated student can get advice, discuss problems at work, and confide possible setbacks to his parents.
      • Main idea 2:  their living expenses can be reduced
        • Supporting idea:
          • While other adults have to pay for rents, bills and other necessities, in this case, the costs can be shared between family members.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng Cụm động từ (Phrasal Verb) tiếng anh
          • Young adults can save some money for other purposes such as further study or investment.
          •  
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: those who refuse to live on their own are more likely to experience a prolonged period of immaturity
        • Supporting idea:
          • Those who remain at home are usually exempt from mundane tasks such as preparing meals, doing laundry and tidying their rooms. Consequently, they are likely to be dependent on their parents and have trouble developing the capacity for self-reliance that is essential for personal and career success.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Idioms trong tiếng anh
          • It will be more difficult for them to make their own well-informed, responsible decisions.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2:  the autonomy and self-efficacy of youngsters can also diminish
        • Supporting idea:
          • Being with overprotective parents can deprive adults of the development of problem-solving and decision-making skills. 
          • Compared to other counterparts, they are less confident when choosing between different options.
        • Example: 

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