Phân tích "Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

· Đề thi IELTS thật,Task 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: students may become aware of the consequences of engaging in criminal activities when attending a talk given by ex-prisoners. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "consequence" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea:
          • Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. 
          • Their life stories are often vivid and persuasive, and this can attract the attention of school students easily. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "attract" tiếng anh 
          • These ex-criminals are real examples that people have to pay for their unlawful activities, which can raise awareness about law-abiding citizens among young people. 
        • Example: The success of a series of educational programs on Vietnamese Television channels about the price that offenders have to pay proves that the narrative forms of crime education can work >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "education" tiếng anh
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: Those who were penalized by the law would feel better by sharing their stories, and this is a fantastic way to keep away from offences for these folks.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • They would feel better by sharing their stories, and this is a fantastic way to keep away from offences for these folks. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "would" tiếng anh 
          • They would also feel connected to society and are glad for doing something great.
        • Example: 

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