Phân tích"In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa)

In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: the Internet allows people to access knowledge from an immense number of sources  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "allow" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • With the help of search engines like Google or Firefox, internet users can explore content on various topics with a couple of mouse clicks.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CẤU TRÚC CÂU NÊN HỌC IELTS
        • They can get access to information immediately anywhere, which is cheaper, much more convenient and time-saving compared to looking for the same amount of knowledge from printed books.
      • Example: For instance, a simple Google search can yield a plethora of resources on 16th-century European art movements, surpassing the limitations of traditional resources like libraries, offering immediate and extensive access to information from anywhere with an internet connection. 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: knowledge on the Internet is stored in different formats, which helps learners absorb the information more effectively  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng LET ALONE trong tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Unlike books, which present information in the form of texts or images only, the Internet provides learners with knowledge in both texts and digital forms like audio or videos. 
      • Example: Auditory learners, for example, would find learning via podcasts, which are common on many websites, more useful than reading books.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng SO SÁNH HƠN trong tiếng anh 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1:
        • Supporting idea: the Internet allows people to access knowledge from an immense number of sources
          • With the help of search engines like Google or Firefox, internet users can explore content on various topics with a couple of mouse clicks. 
          • They can get access to information immediately anywhere, which is cheaper, much more convenient and time-saving compared to looking for the same amount of knowledge from printed books.
        • Example: For instance, a simple Google search can yield a plethora of resources on 16th-century European art movements, surpassing the limitations of traditional resources like libraries, offering immediate and extensive access to information from anywhere with an internet connection.
      • Main idea 2: knowledge on the Internet is stored in different formats, which helps learners absorb the information more effectively
        • Supporting idea: Unlike books, which present information in the form of texts or images only, the Internet provides learners with knowledge in both texts and digital forms like audio or videos.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Giải thích từ mới passage ''Twisted Light''
        • Example: Auditory learners, for example, would find learning via podcasts, which are common on many websites, more useful than reading books.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: the reliability of information on the web is not guaranteed
        • Supporting idea:  Since anything can be posted on the Internet without verification, there are many unreliable sources which deliver inaccurate knowledge, making it hard for an average user to differentiate between true and false information
        • Example: In the realm of online research, encountering a website advocating for cancer cures through apple seeds highlights the pervasive issues of unverified content and fake news, emphasizing the importance of critically evaluating online information and relying on reputable sources for accurate knowledge.

      • Main idea 2: digital piracy is another problem when it comes to online knowledge storage.
        • Supporting idea:
          • The Internet has paved the way for the boom in copyright infringements in the last decade.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ
          • Tons of websites are distributing pirated, free electronic books to increase their web traffic, which can help them earn money from running online advertisements. 

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