Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI TASK 1 VIẾT THƯ NGÀY 05/7/2020"you are going to take a holiday and your friend agrees to stay at your house. Write a letter to him for"IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa HS đạt 6.0 đi thi thật), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "More and more people want to study at university, so competition for university places is increasing. Why more and more people want to study at university? Is it a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

More and more people want to study at university, so competition for university places is increasing. Why more and more people want to study at university? Is it a positive or negative development?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: University education provides a deeper and broader knowledge base, as well as specialized skills in various fields. 
      • Supporting idea: Graduates are equipped with critical thinking abilities and analytical skills that can be applied to a wide range of professions.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: My friend - Sarah, a software engineer with a degree in computer science from a top university, possesses a deep knowledge of computer science, specialized software development skills, and critical thinking abilities that enhance her value to her employer and career advancement opportunities.
    • Main idea 2: Many professions, such as medicine, law, engineering, and academia, require advanced degrees that can only be obtained through university education. 
      • Supporting idea: Graduates of these programs have access to higher-paying job opportunities.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea 1: In some cases, there may be a disconnect between the skills graduates possess and the skills demanded by the job market. 
      • Supporting idea: This can lead to unemployment or underemployment, as graduates struggle to find positions that align with their qualifications.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: A recent English literature graduate faced challenges finding a job until they realized the importance of aligning their skills with employer demands, leading them to acquire new skills in technical writing, content marketing, and social media marketing, ultimately securing a suitable position as a technical writer.
    • Main idea 2: A higher number of university graduates can intensify competition for jobs, making it more challenging for individuals to secure employment, particularly in fields where demand is not commensurate with supply.
      • Supporting idea: In certain industries or geographic regions, the number of job openings may not align with the volume of graduates seeking employment, resulting in a job market imbalance.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Today, an increasing number of individuals aspire to enter university, resulting in a rise in competition for tertiary places. This trend is driven by several important factors, though it also gives rise to certain drawbacks.

One primary reason why more people pursue university education is that it provides a more comprehensive (toàn diện / complete & detailed) knowledge base and equips students with highly specialized (chuyên môn / focused & technical) skills. Such training helps learners develop strong analytical (phân tích / logical & systematic) abilities, enabling them to perform effectively in diverse professional settings. For example, my friend Sarah, a software engineer with a computer science degree from a renowned institution, possesses deep theoretical understanding and advanced programming skills that significantly strengthen her career prospects. Additionally, many professions—including medicine, law, and engineering—require formal qualifications that are obtainable only through universities. Consequently, graduates from these fields gain access to highly lucrative (béo bở / financially rewarding) career pathways, which further motivates people to seek higher education.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

However, despite these advantages, this development has notable negative aspects. First, a noticeable skills mismatch (không tương xứng / lack of alignment) between graduates’ abilities and market needs often occurs. This gap may lead to unemployment or underemployment as individuals struggle to find roles that align with their academic backgrounds. A recent literature graduate, for instance, only succeeded in obtaining stable employment after retraining in technical writing and digital marketing. Furthermore, a growing number of degree holders intensifies job competition, particularly in fields where supply far outstrips (vượt quá / exceeds significantly) demand. This imbalance can worsen job insecurity and hinder many graduates from securing appropriate employment.

In conclusion, although the surge in university attendance is driven by the pursuit of knowledge and professional growth, it also brings challenges related to job alignment and heightened employment competition.

NEW VOCABULARY LIST

1. comprehensive (toàn diện): complete, covering all aspects

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: a more comprehensive knowledge base

• Synonyms: thorough, extensive, exhaustive

• Antonyms: limited, narrow, incomplete

2. specialized (chuyên môn): focused on a specific field

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: highly specialized skills

• Synonyms: expert, technical, professional

• Antonyms: general, basic, broad

3. analytical (phân tích): able to examine information logically

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: strong analytical abilities

• Synonyms: logical, systematic, rational

• Antonyms: illogical, irrational, unstructured

4. lucrative (béo bở): producing a lot of money

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: highly lucrative career pathways

• Synonyms: profitable, rewarding, well-paid

• Antonyms: unprofitable, poorly paid, unrewarding

5. mismatch (không tương xứng): lack of fit or alignment

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: a noticeable skills mismatch

• Synonyms: discrepancy, imbalance, inconsistency

• Antonyms: match, alignment, compatibility

6. outstrips (vượt quá): to exceed or surpass

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: supply far outstrips demand

• Synonyms: exceeds, surpasses, overtakes

• Antonyms: falls behind, lags, trails

DIFFICULT GRAMMAR STRUCTURES

1. Reduced relative clause

• training helps learners develop strong analytical abilities, enabling them to perform effectively…
  → “enabling” = reduced form of “which enables”
  → Việc rút gọn mệnh đề quan hệ giúp câu ngắn gọn và học thuật hơn.

2. Noun phrase with multiple modifiers

• a more comprehensive knowledge base
  → cụm danh từ phức có nhiều tính từ bổ nghĩa

3. Cleft sentence (emphasis)

• It is formal qualifications that are obtainable only through universities.
  → nhấn mạnh vào "formal qualifications"

4. Complex concessive structure

• Although the surge in university attendance is driven by the pursuit of knowledge…, it also brings challenges…
  → Cấu trúc nhượng bộ “Although…, …”

5. Participle phrase

• Consequently, graduates … gain access to highly lucrative career pathways, further motivating people…
  → “further motivating…” = một cụm phân từ chỉ kết quả

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