Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe the government is responsible for, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both view and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe the government is responsible for, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both view and give your opinion

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

It is widely recognised that the transportation of goods and passengers is a major contributor to environmental contamination. While some argue that governments should bear primary responsibility, others insist that individuals must also be held accountable, and I believe an effective solution requires both parties to play a concerted (phối hợp đồng bộ – coordinated) role.

Those who argue that the government is chiefly responsible contend that only state authorities possess the capacity to implement comprehensive (toàn diện – complete and broad) policies to curb pollution. Through stricter emission laws, investment in eco-friendly (thân thiện với môi trường – environmentally safe) public transport, and the enforcement of fuel-efficiency standards, governments can drastically reduce vehicle-related pollutants. Furthermore, large-scale actions such as expanding electric-vehicle infrastructure and imposing hefty (nặng nề – large and severe) penalties on high-polluting industries are beyond the reach of ordinary citizens. Without such top-down intervention, individual efforts may remain piecemeal (manh mún – fragmented and incomplete) and ineffective.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, supporters of individual responsibility highlight that personal behaviour significantly influences pollution levels. Many people still choose carbon-intensive (thải nhiều carbon – producing high CO₂) modes of transportation, such as private cars or motorbikes, even for short distances. If individuals opted for car-pooling, cycling, or public transit, the cumulative impact could be substantial. Additionally, consumers drive demand for imported goods, meaning their purchasing decisions indirectly generate transport-related emissions. Therefore, citizens must develop a heightened (tăng cao – increased) sense of environmental consciousness and adopt more sustainable (bền vững – environmentally lasting) travel habits.

Conclusion (1 sentence)
In my view, addressing transport-related pollution demands joint action, in which governments provide robust regulatory frameworks while individuals make conscious, environment-friendly choices.

💠 New Vocabulary List 

1. concerted (phối hợp đồng bộ – coordinated)

• Synonyms: united, collaborative, combined

• Antonyms: individual, isolated, uncoordinated

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: both parties to play a concerted role.

2. comprehensive (toàn diện – complete and broad)

• Synonyms: thorough, extensive, wide-ranging

• Antonyms: limited, narrow, restricted

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: implement comprehensive policies to curb pollution.>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

3. eco-friendly (thân thiện với môi trường – environmentally safe)

• Synonyms: green, sustainable, non-polluting

• Antonyms: harmful, polluting, toxic

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: investment in eco-friendly public transport.

4. hefty (nặng nề – large and severe)

• Synonyms: severe, heavy, substantial

• Antonyms: light, mild, insignificant

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: imposing hefty penalties.

5. piecemeal (manh mún – fragmented and incomplete)

• Synonyms: fragmented, patchy, partial

• Antonyms: systematic, complete, holistic

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: individual efforts may remain piecemeal.

6. carbon-intensive (thải nhiều carbon – producing high CO₂)

• Synonyms: high-emission, polluting, CO₂-heavy

• Antonyms: low-carbon, energy-efficient, clean

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: choose carbon-intensive modes of transportation.

7. heightened (tăng cao – increased)

• Synonyms: raised, intensified, amplified

• Antonyms: reduced, lowered, weakened

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: a heightened sense of environmental consciousness.

8. sustainable (bền vững – environmentally lasting)

• Synonyms: eco-friendly, viable, renewable

• Antonyms: unsustainable, harmful, wasteful

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: adopt more sustainable travel habits.

💠 Difficult Grammar Structures Explained

1. “While some argue that…, others insist that…” – complex contrast clause

→ Thể hiện hai quan điểm đối lập một cách trang trọng.
VN: Trong khi một số người cho rằng…, những người khác lại khẳng định rằng…

2. “Without such top-down intervention, individual efforts may remain piecemeal and ineffective.” – conditional clause without if

VN: Nếu không có sự can thiệp từ trên xuống như vậy, nỗ lực của cá nhân có thể vẫn manh mún và kém hiệu quả.

3. “Those who argue that…, contend that…” – defining relative clause + reporting verb

VN: Những người cho rằng…, lập luận rằng…

4. “In my view, addressing… demands joint action…” – gerund as subject

VN: Theo tôi, việc giải quyết… đòi hỏi hành động chung…

5. “Consumers drive demand…, meaning their purchasing decisions…” – reduced non-finite clause

VN: Người tiêu dùng thúc đẩy nhu cầu…, nghĩa là quyết định mua sắm của họ…

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