Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your answer with examples and relevant evidence.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: It is important for developed countries to find ways to invest in developing nations, instead of just donating money. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When developed countries give money to undeveloped countries, it will help citizens in these countries solve short-term problems, and it will not last long.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Money IELTS
        • To make matters worse, governments in poor countries may misuse the money they are given because they do not have the resources or the know-how to tackle the causes of poverty.
        • Therefore, there is a risk that the money will not go to the people who need it most. 
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Hands-on support is long-term solutions to sustainable development
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Even if financially supported, third world countries still need experts in the fields of science, law and medicine in order to encourage their development (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: practical assistance and advice are indispensable for further advancement)
        • Scientists, lawyers and doctors can only be trained, and professional and systematic education and training programs are therefore more practical and suitable in the context of developing nations  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "SPEND" TIẾNG ANH
        • Technology transferring and labour force training have long-lasting effects on developing countries’ economy, shortening the gap between the first-world countries and the second-world ones.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  , Which rút gọn thành , Ving trong mệnh đề quan hệ
      • Example: 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Rich nations have traditionally offered financial support to poorer countries, but such assistance rarely eliminates poverty. This essay fully agrees that developed countries should prioritise other forms of help because non-monetary support yields far more long-term results.

The first reason is that simply donating money often provides only short-lived (ngắn hạn) relief rather than tangible (hữu hình, rõ ràng) progress. Although cash injections may temporarily ease hunger or unemployment, they fail to address the root causes (nguyên nhân cốt lõi) of poverty. To make matters worse, funds may be misappropriated (sử dụng sai mục đích, tham ô) by governments lacking the institutional capacity (năng lực thể chế) or expertise to manage large-scale development programmes. As a result, aid money may never reach the individuals who need it most, leading to a counterproductive (phản tác dụng) cycle in which dependency grows while structural issues remain unsolved. A notable example is several African countries where billions of dollars in aid have been distributed, yet corruption and inadequate governance prevented any substantial improvements.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Another compelling reason is that hands-on (thực tiễn, trực tiếp) support provides sustainable solutions. Developing nations need not only funding but also specialised expertise (chuyên môn chuyên biệt) in sciences, law, medicine, and technology to accelerate national development. Experts can train local workers through systematic training schemes (chương trình đào tạo bài bản) and strengthen public institutions—support that money alone cannot deliver. Moreover, technology transfer (chuyển giao công nghệ) and professional training produce long-lasting (bền vững, lâu dài) effects, helping reduce the development gap between wealthy and poorer nations. For instance, South Korea benefited significantly from the technological cooperation it received during the 20th century, which laid the foundation for its economic transformation.

In conclusion, non-financial assistance is far more effective than financial aid in promoting sustainable development in poorer countries.

NEW VOCABULARY LIST

1. short-lived – ngắn hạn

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “donating money often provides only short-lived relief…”
Synonyms: temporary, fleeting, momentary
Antonyms: long-lasting, enduring, permanent

2. tangible – hữu hình, rõ ràng

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “rather than tangible progress.”
Synonyms: concrete, measurable, noticeable
Antonyms: abstract, vague, intangible

3. root causes – nguyên nhân cốt lõi

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “they fail to address the root causes of poverty.”
Synonyms: fundamental causes, underlying causes, primary causes
Antonyms: superficial factors, secondary reasons, minor issues

4. misappropriated – sử dụng sai mục đích, tham ô

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “funds may be misappropriated by governments…”
Synonyms: embezzled, diverted, misused
Antonyms: properly allocated, utilised correctly, lawfully managed

5. institutional capacity – năng lực thể chế

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “lacking the institutional capacity to manage programmes.”
Synonyms: administrative capability, governance ability, organisational strength
Antonyms: institutional weakness, mismanagement, administrative incompetence

6. counterproductive – phản tác dụng

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “leading to a counterproductive cycle…”
Synonyms: harmful, detrimental, backfiring
Antonyms: beneficial, constructive, effective

7. hands-on – thực tiễn, trực tiếp

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “hands-on support provides sustainable solutions.”
Synonyms: practical, direct, experiential
Antonyms: theoretical, indirect, detached

8. specialised expertise – chuyên môn chuyên biệt

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “need… specialised expertise in sciences, law, medicine…”
Synonyms: professional knowledge, advanced skills, technical competence
Antonyms: general knowledge, inexperience, unskilled labour

9. systematic training schemes – chương trình đào tạo bài bản

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “through systematic training schemes…”
Synonyms: structured programmes, organised training, formal instruction
Antonyms: chaotic training, unstructured learning, informal guidance

10. technology transfer – chuyển giao công nghệ

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Moreover, technology transfer and professional training…”
Synonyms: tech handover, knowledge transfer, innovation sharing
Antonyms: technology isolation, knowledge withholding, innovation restriction

11. long-lasting – bền vững, lâu dài

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “produce long-lasting effects…”
Synonyms: enduring, durable, permanent
Antonyms: short-lived, momentary, temporary

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