🔥Phân tích"Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can get study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó(Đề thi IELTS 15/07/2023 &2/3/2025)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can get study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 15/07/2023)

Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can get study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Schools provide a structured environment that nurtures holistic development in children. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Education is not just about acquiring knowledge but also developing social skills, emotional intelligence, and physical abilities.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ"intelligent"tiếng anh
        • Schools offer a variety of extracurricular activities, such as sports, arts, and group projects, which foster teamwork, discipline, creativity, and self-expression. 
        • These experiences contribute to a well-rounded education that cannot be fully replicated through online learning.
      • Example: 
        • A study published in the journal "Health Education & Behavior" found that children who attended schools with a school-wide focus on wellness were more likely to eat healthy foods, be physically active, and have good mental health.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Schools serve as important social settings where children interact with peers from diverse backgrounds. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Interpersonal skills, teamwork, and cooperation are honed through face-to-face interactions, which are essential for personal growth and success in the real world. 
        • In school, children learn to navigate social dynamics, develop empathy, and understand the importance of community and cultural diversity.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"navigate"tiếng anh
        • Such skills are not solely acquired by consuming information online but through meaningful interactions with teachers and fellow students.
      • Example: A study published in the journal "American Educational Research Journal" found that children who attended schools with a diverse student body were more likely to be civically engaged and participate in community activities.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The rise of ubiquitous (phổ biến khắp nơi - present, appearing, or found everywhere) online resources has led some to believe that traditional schools are obsolete. However, I strongly contend (kiên quyết cho rằng - firmly argue or assert a point of view) that schools remain indispensable, as they offer a structured learning environment (môi trường học tập có tổ chức - a setting with a clear educational framework) that fosters both academic and social development.

First and foremost, schools provide a well-rounded education (giáo dục toàn diện - education that covers multiple aspects, not just academics) that extends beyond mere knowledge acquisition. Education is a multifaceted process (quá trình nhiều mặt - a process involving different aspects), encompassing the development of social intelligence (trí thông minh xã hội - the ability to navigate social interactions effectively), emotional well-being, and physical health. Schools facilitate this through extracurricular pursuits (hoạt động ngoại khóa - activities outside the academic curriculum) such as sports, arts, and community service, which nurture team spirit (tinh thần đồng đội - a sense of collaboration within a group), self-discipline (tự giác kỷ luật - the ability to control one’s behavior and actions), and creative expression (sự thể hiện sáng tạo - the ability to express original ideas through art, music, or writing). These experiences, which are crucial for shaping a child's cognitive and emotional growth (sự phát triển nhận thức và cảm xúc - the development of thinking abilities and emotional intelligence), cannot be fully emulated (hoàn toàn mô phỏng - completely imitated or replicated) in an online setting. For instance, research in the journal Health Education & Behavior indicates that students attending schools that prioritize wellness tend to adopt healthier lifestyles and demonstrate superior mental resilience.

Moreover, schools serve as vital social hubs (trung tâm xã hội quan trọng - essential places where people interact and build relationships) where children interact with peers from diverse backgrounds, honing essential interpersonal competencies (kỹ năng giao tiếp giữa cá nhân - abilities that facilitate effective social interaction). Engaging in face-to-face discussions, collaborating on projects, and resolving conflicts in real-time cultivate (trau dồi - develop or refine a skill through practice) pragmatic social skills (kỹ năng xã hội thực tế - practical abilities in dealing with social situations), such as empathy, adaptability, and leadership. Furthermore, exposure to individuals from various cultures within a school setting fosters cross-cultural understanding (hiểu biết liên văn hóa - awareness and appreciation of different cultures), which is invaluable in today’s globalized world. These formative interactions (tương tác mang tính hình thành - social exchanges that shape character and development) are not replicable through remote learning platforms (nền tảng học tập từ xa - online educational systems), as digital communication lacks the depth and spontaneity (tính tự phát - natural, unplanned responses or actions) of real-world interactions. A study in the American Educational Research Journal affirms that students from diverse educational environments are more likely to engage in civic activities and contribute to their communities.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In conclusion, while the Internet provides vast amounts of knowledge, it cannot replace the invaluable experiential learning (học tập qua trải nghiệm - learning gained through real-life experiences), social cohesion (sự gắn kết xã hội - the sense of connection and solidarity among people), and personal refinement (sự hoàn thiện cá nhân - the process of improving one’s character and skills) that schools uniquely offer.

New Vocabulary with Definitions

1. Ubiquitous (phổ biến khắp nơi - present, appearing, or found everywhere)
2. Strongly contend (kiên quyết cho rằng - firmly argue or assert a point of view)
3. Structured learning environment (môi trường học tập có tổ chức - a setting with a clear educational framework)
4. Well-rounded education (giáo dục toàn diện - education that covers multiple aspects, not just academics)
5. Multifaceted process (quá trình nhiều mặt - a process involving different aspects)
6. Social intelligence (trí thông minh xã hội - the ability to navigate social interactions effectively)
7. Extracurricular pursuits (hoạt động ngoại khóa - activities outside the academic curriculum)
8. Team spirit (tinh thần đồng đội - a sense of collaboration within a group)
9. Self-discipline (tự giác kỷ luật - the ability to control one’s behavior and actions)
10. Creative expression (sự thể hiện sáng tạo - the ability to express original ideas through art, music, or writing)
11. Cognitive and emotional growth (sự phát triển nhận thức và cảm xúc - the development of thinking abilities and emotional intelligence)
12. Fully emulated (hoàn toàn mô phỏng - completely imitated or replicated)
13. Vital social hubs (trung tâm xã hội quan trọng - essential places where people interact and build relationships)
14. Interpersonal competencies (kỹ năng giao tiếp giữa cá nhân - abilities that facilitate effective social interaction)
15. Cultivate (trau dồi - develop or refine a skill through practice)
16. Pragmatic social skills (kỹ năng xã hội thực tế - practical abilities in dealing with social situations)
17. Cross-cultural understanding (hiểu biết liên văn hóa - awareness and appreciation of different cultures)
18. Formative interactions (tương tác mang tính hình thành - social exchanges that shape character and development)
19. Remote learning platforms (nền tảng học tập từ xa - online educational systems)
20. Spontaneity (tính tự phát - natural, unplanned responses or actions)
21. Experiential learning (học tập qua trải nghiệm - learning gained through real-life experiences)
22. Social cohesion (sự gắn kết xã hội - the sense of connection and solidarity among people)
23. Personal refinement (sự hoàn thiện cá nhân - the process of improving one’s character and skills)

Synonyms & Antonyms

• Ubiquitous: Omnipresent, prevalent, widespread / Scarce, infrequent, limited
• Structured learning environment: Organized framework, systematic education, methodical schooling / Unstructured setting, disorganized approach, chaotic system
• Cognitive and emotional growth: Intellectual and affective development, mental and emotional maturity, psychological progress / Mental stagnation, emotional immaturity, cognitive decline

Advanced Grammar Structures & Translations

1. Nominalization (Danh từ hóa câu để tăng độ trang trọng)

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Schools facilitate this through extracurricular pursuits such as sports, arts, and community service, which nurture team spirit, self-discipline, and creative expression."
   • → "Việc giáo dục tại trường học được thực hiện thông qua các hoạt động ngoại khóa như thể thao, nghệ thuật và phục vụ cộng đồng, giúp nuôi dưỡng tinh thần đồng đội, kỷ luật tự giác và khả năng sáng tạo."

2. Reduced Relative Clause (Mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn)

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "A study in the American Educational Research Journal affirms that students from diverse educational environments are more likely to engage in civic activities."
   • → "Một nghiên cứu trên tạp chí American Educational Research Journal khẳng định rằng học sinh từ môi trường giáo dục đa dạng có xu hướng tham gia nhiều hơn vào các hoạt động công dân."

3. Cleft Sentence (Câu chẻ để nhấn mạnh thông tin)

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "It is the real-world interactions in schools that truly develop social skills."
   • → "Chính những tương tác thực tế tại trường học mới thực sự phát triển kỹ năng xã hội."

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