Phân tích"Some people say that protecting the. environment is the government’s responsibility. Other believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi Úc 30/6/2022)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Other believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi Úc 30/6/2022)

I. Đề bài

Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Other believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

  • Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
  • Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility
      • Main idea 1: The government has more tools to prevent environmental changes  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The government has higher authority and power, and hence it can play a greater role in protecting the environment)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"prevent"tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:
          • One option that the authorities have is to discourage citizens from using personal vehicles by charging high taxes and additional fees. 
          • There should be some laws encouraging factories to move to the country sides rather than staying in cities. This could help urban areas to be further protected from the poisonous fumes, which are always discharged from firms.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
        • Example: For instance, the government should not support any industry which produces a higher amount of harmful gases >< authorities should encourage industries to produce green energy from renewable sources such as solar and hydro energy.
      • Main idea 2: politicians usually have access to resources to educate people about environmental problems 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • It is vital to promote the most important ecological projects on all levels, ranging from special courses at schools to TV shows and websites related to this topic.
          • The government can make environment a subject in the primary school curriculum to spread awareness about protecting the environment.
        • Example:  
      • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm:
        • Main idea: some environmental issues are too big for individuals to deal with. 
        • Supporting idea: In order for serious problems, such as global warming, prolonged droughts, violent storms or other extreme weather events, to be effectively addressed, it requires the efforts and cooperation of politicians and large environmental organisations. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • Example:  For instance, it takes years for researchers to collect various samples and analyse huge amounts of data in order to know the major causes of global warming, and to help them find the most effective solutions to tackle this problem.
    • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm every individual should be responsible for it & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
      • Main idea 1: each person can play an important role in protecting their own neighborhood
        • Supporting idea:
          • By using their own vehicles only in rare cases, people would be able to protect the environment.
          • By stopping plastic waste from entering and contaminating waterways, people are able to conserve drinkable water and its inhabitants
          • a simple lifestyle change such as introducing the separation of household rubbish can make recycling projects more convenient and efficient. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: consumers can reduce their usage of plastic items and, in turn, less plastic waste will contaminate the environment)
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: without the cooperation of both politicians and individuals, environmental issues will never be effectively tackled  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: it seems impossible to achieve any noticeable result in this field without the participation of vast majority of individuals)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt"protect"&"prevent"tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example:  For example, if farmers continue to burn forests for their own purposes, regardless of the government’s regulations, the problem of climate change will never be successfully mitigated.

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