Phân tích "Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 20/2/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 20/2/2023)

Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE 
    • Main idea: The majority of reputational newspapers cover current affairs that have direct effects on people’s lives. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "cover" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The media is an effective way to disseminate information, to even the most remote places, and this can help to bring people together in order to solve serious problems.
        • Reading prestigious sources of information such as….makes readers aware of what is happening in the world. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "prestigious" tiếng anh 
      • Example: Reputable newspapers like The Washington Post or The BBC can act as catalysts for positive change. Their in-depth reporting on critical issues, such as climate change or human rights violations, can spark public discourse and inspire collective action.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE 
    • Main idea: The more negative stories appear in the media, the higher chance that people will become aware of those problems and take action towards a solution.
      • Supporting idea: being informed allows us to avoid threats to the well-beings of not only ourselves, but also those in our community.
      • Example:  
        • For instance, news about cancer has now become a common topic in the media, and as a result, a large number of people have switched to a healthier lifestyle.
        • For example, those who keep themselves informed of the latest news related to the outbreak of Coronavirus, a lethal pandemic the world over, can ensure the safety of themselves and their families. Conversely, those who ignore such news can fail to conduct necessary medical procedures and jeopardize their health. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "conduct" 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo số 1:

Some argue that news is irrelevant to people's daily lives, making reading newspapers or watching television news programs a waste of time. However, I completely disagree with this viewpoint.

Firstly, reputable newspapers and news channels cover current affairs that significantly impact people's lives. The media serves as an effective way to disseminate information, even to the most remote places, fostering collective awareness and problem-solving. Reading prestigious sources of information, such as The Washington Post or The BBC, helps readers stay informed about global events. For instance, these outlets' in-depth reporting on issues like climate change or human rights violations can spark public discourse and inspire collective action, acting as catalysts for positive change.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)

Secondly, the coverage of negative stories in the media can raise awareness and prompt action towards solutions. Being informed enables individuals to avoid threats not only to their well-being but also to their community's safety. For example, extensive media coverage of cancer has led many people to adopt healthier lifestyles. Similarly, those who keep up with news about the Coronavirus pandemic can take necessary precautions to protect themselves and their families. Conversely, individuals who ignore such news may neglect essential medical procedures, thereby jeopardizing their health.

In conclusion, news is far from irrelevant; it plays a crucial role in informing and safeguarding the public, proving that consuming news is indeed a valuable and necessary activity.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo số 2:

Some people claim that keeping up with the news is a waste of time because it has little to do with ordinary citizens’ lives. However, I totally disagree with this view because the media plays a vital role in keeping people informed about crucial global issues and empowering them to take meaningful actions.

To begin with, the majority of reputable (có uy tín – respected, trusted) newspapers cover current affairs (thời sự – contemporary events, present issues) that have direct impacts on people’s lives. The media serves as an effective tool to disseminate (phổ biến – spread, circulate) information even to the most remote (xa xôi – isolated, faraway) areas, helping people unite to solve pressing (cấp bách – urgent, critical) problems. Reading prestigious (danh tiếng – esteemed, distinguished) sources of information such as The Washington Post or the BBC keeps readers aware of what is happening worldwide. For instance, these outlets often act as catalysts for change (chất xúc tác cho sự thay đổi – driving force, trigger), with their in-depth (chi tiết, sâu sắc – thorough, comprehensive) reports on climate change or human rights violations sparking (khơi dậy – ignite, trigger) public discussion and inspiring collective action (truyền cảm hứng hành động tập thể – motivate group effort).

Furthermore, staying informed through news enables people to recognize threats and act promptly to safeguard their well-being. The more negative stories appear in the media, the more likely it is that individuals will become aware of those problems and take action to address them. For example, constant coverage about the lethal (chết người – deadly, fatal) pandemic Coronavirus prompted people worldwide to adopt health-conscious (quan tâm đến sức khỏe – mindful of health) lifestyles. Conversely, those who ignore (phớt lờ – disregard, neglect) such updates may fail to undertake (thực hiện – carry out, perform) necessary medical precautions, thereby jeopardizing (gây nguy hiểm – endanger, risk) their health and that of their families.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In conclusion, keeping up with the news should not be viewed as a waste of time but rather as a lifeline (nguồn sống – vital source, essential connection) that connects individuals with the world and helps them make well-informed decisions.

⚙️ Difficult Grammar Structures

1. “The majority of reputable newspapers cover current affairs that have direct impacts on people’s lives.”
   → Mệnh đề quan hệ “that have direct impacts…” bổ nghĩa cho danh từ “current affairs”
   🇻🇳 “Phần lớn các tờ báo uy tín đưa tin về các vấn đề thời sự có ảnh hưởng trực tiếp đến cuộc sống con người.”

2. “Reading prestigious sources of information such as The Washington Post or the BBC keeps readers aware of what is happening worldwide.”
   → Cấu trúc “V-ing làm chủ ngữ” + “keeps someone aware of” (giữ cho ai đó nhận thức về...)
   🇻🇳 “Việc đọc các nguồn thông tin danh tiếng như Washington Post hay BBC giúp người đọc nhận thức về những gì đang diễn ra trên thế giới.”>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

3. “The more negative stories appear in the media, the more likely it is that individuals will become aware of those problems.”
   → Cấu trúc so sánh kép “The more..., the more...”
   🇻🇳 “Càng có nhiều câu chuyện tiêu cực xuất hiện trên truyền thông, mọi người càng có khả năng nhận thức về những vấn đề đó.”

4. “Those who ignore such updates may fail to undertake necessary medical precautions.”
   → Mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn với “Those who ignore…” (những người phớt lờ...)
   🇻🇳 “Những người phớt lờ các thông tin cập nhật như vậy có thể không thực hiện các biện pháp y tế cần thiết.”

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