Phân tích"In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of travelling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (computer-based 24/4/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of travelling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (computer-based 24/4/2022).

In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of travelling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
      • Main idea: people do not have to travel to the office or school, so they can save more time and avoid traffic congestion >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng & Ideas topic "Congestion" IELTS
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
      • Main idea: people will have a flexible schedule. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "schedule" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For example, if a student gets sick, he or she can easily learn from a distance through e-learning method with a computer or smart phone connected with the Internet.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: people do not have to travel to the office or school, so they can save more time and avoid traffic congestion >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase "TO SAVE TIME / TIME-SAVING"
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: people will have a flexible schedule. 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: For example, if a student gets sick, he or she can easily learn from a distance through e-learning method with a computer or smart phone connected with the Internet.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: people might lose social skills when they work or study at home.
        • Supporting idea: Going to the office or college, everyone can experience interacting with many types of people in society, which brings experiences and soft skills such as team work, communication, or time management skill. 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: workers and students can be attracted by many kinds of entertainment at home like computer games or television shows, which obviously affects the productivity.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 

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