Phân tích "Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea:  technology has made our lives more convenient than ever before   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "CONVENIENT" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: Smart home technologies minimise the number of routine activities performed by people such as controlling the air conditioner and checking for groceries at home
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: giving up modern technology would result in a much more complex society, and our lives will be difficult  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "convenience" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Modern technology has been integrated into nearly every field of our communities, taking control of many areas. 
        • If the Internet were abandoned in the business sector, many daily tasks could not be accomplished, such as international video conferencing or daily managerial tasks. 
        • Our recreational activities have become closely connected with such technology as well, such as online shopping, Internet banking service and video streaming service  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase "convenient" tiếng anh
        • These modern inventions are exactly what makes our lives so colourful
      • Example: When the internet and phone technology were not popular in the past, a person needed to send a letter if he wanted to communicate with a friend far away.  In fact, the whole process was complicated and it could take days until the sender received a response  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "comfortable" tiếng anh

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

While some believe that technology complicates life, I strongly disagree and argue that technology has significantly improved our lives by making them more convenient and efficient.

Firstly, technology has made our daily routines more convenient than ever before. Smart home technologies, for example, minimize the number of routine activities people need to perform. From controlling the air conditioner remotely to checking groceries at home, these technologies simplify our lives, allowing us to focus on more important tasks. Additionally, advancements in transportation technology have made traveling more efficient, reducing the time and effort required to commute or travel long distances. This level of convenience would be impossible to achieve without modern technology.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Secondly, abandoning modern technology would result in a much more complex and difficult society. Technology is deeply integrated into nearly every aspect of our communities, controlling and simplifying many areas. For instance, the business sector relies heavily on the Internet for tasks such as international video conferencing and daily managerial activities. Without technology, these tasks would be nearly impossible to accomplish efficiently. Furthermore, our recreational activities are closely connected to technology, with online shopping, Internet banking services, and video streaming services making our lives more enjoyable and colourful. In the past, simple tasks like sending a letter to a friend far away were complicated and time-consuming, highlighting how technology has simplified communication.

In conclusion, technology has undeniably made our lives more convenient and efficient, and giving it up would only lead to a more complex and difficult society.

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