Phân tích"​Some people think that people who damage public property (such as buildings or statues) should be punished by community services (such as cleaning parks) instead of other punishments such as paying a fine and going to prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"​Some people think that people who damage public property (such as buildings or statues) should be punished by community services (such as cleaning parks) instead of other punishments such as paying a fine and going to prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that people who damage public property (such as buildings or statues) should be punished by community services (such as cleaning parks) instead of other punishments such as paying a fine and going to prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea:  it is not necessary to punish every criminal with a mandatory prison term.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase"punish"(Diễn đạt"trách phạt"tiếng anh)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Heinous crimes such as premediated murder or acts of terrorism should be given stringent punishments including prison terms; however, someone who commits a petty crime on the spur of the moment should have an opportunity to learn their mistake and reform themselves. 
        • It is better to make them do unpaid community service instead of confining them to prison.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: community service is healthier than imprisonment. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The goal of rehabilitative justice is noble in that punishment provisions should rehabilitate prisoners and probationers by making them better people. Thus, they will no longer commit crimes.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: community service offer help to the offenders to rehabilitate themselves more effectively than in prison)
        • By community service the offenders are able to give something back to the community as prove that they have change.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "corporal" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác:
    • Main idea: The increase in the numbers of prisoners subsequently increases the cost for running the prison.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CỤM TỪ CỐ ĐỊNH CẤU TRÚC "STH AND STH" 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Community service is a great way to cut government costs on punishing offenders as it provide for the less expensive approach with similar effect and helps in reducing the overcrowding problem in prison. 
      • Consequently, the money saved can be used for development, thus improving the living of the country. 

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