Giải đề"Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference"(Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR) - Kèm bài mẫu & giải thích vocab

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Phân tích & sửa essay về "Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference"

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

Với các dạng đề có từ tuyệt đối như NOTHING, ONLY cần để ý kĩ, dạng opinion essay này có thể bố cục bài như sau nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề cho:

• Body 1: nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề cho là (Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference), có thể triển khai:
  • Main idea: individuals can be considered as the smallest units of society where environmental actions start. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "CONSIDER" tiếng anh  
  • Supporting idea: when living in the natural world, each person has a variety of needs everyday to fulfil, and many of them directly affect the environment
  • Example: a reduction in the use of plastic bags by a shopper, or an action of turning off unnecessary lights seems insignificant but really makes great differences in protecting the environment. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "difference" tiếng anh
• Body 2: nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề cho, có thể triển khai:
  • Main idea: Household waste accounts for a significant percentage of the total waste discharged into the environment.
  • Supporting idea: On average, each person releases approximately 1.8 kilograms of waste, especially non-recyclable plastic products, on a daily basis, contributing to the death of marine creatures and contaminating our habitats. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng & word form của "contaminate"

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

It is argued that individuals play no role in environmental protection and that only governments and large corporations can address such problems. I completely disagree with this view because individual actions serve as the foundation of environmental change and household waste remains a key contributor to pollution.

Firstly, individuals are the smallest units of society and can act as catalysts (chat xúc tác – English: agents that speed up change) for environmental improvement. Every person interacts with nature daily by consuming resources, and their choices can either harm or help the planet. Simple changes—such as bringing reusable shopping bags or switching off non-essential appliances—might seem trivial (nhỏ nhặt – English: minor or insignificant) but collectively generate significant impact. If millions of people adopt such habits, the cumulative result would be transformative (mang tính thay đổi lớn – English: causing a major change). For instance, a shopper reducing the use of plastic bags not only cuts down plastic waste but also influences others to do the same, fostering a more eco-conscious (ý thức về môi trường – English: aware and concerned about the environment) society.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Secondly, individual households are major contributors to environmental degradation. Domestic waste, particularly non-biodegradable materials like plastic, makes up a large portion of the total waste disposed of each day. On average, each person generates around 1.8 kilograms of garbage, most of which ends up contaminating (làm ô nhiễm – English: polluting or making something impure) oceans and land. This causes devastating effects, from killing marine wildlife to poisoning food chains. Therefore, encouraging individuals to separate waste or adopt sustainable consumption patterns is crucial (quan trọng – English: vital or extremely important) in tackling pollution.

In conclusion, individual actions are indispensable (không thể thiếu – English: absolutely necessary) in environmental conservation, and it is erroneous to rely solely on governments or companies.

🔍 New Vocabulary with Definitions

1. Catalysts (chat xúc tác): Agents that initiate or accelerate change

   • Synonyms: stimulus, trigger, motivator

   • Antonyms: barrier, hindrance, obstacle

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Individuals... can act as catalysts for environmental improvement."

2. Trivial (nhỏ nhặt): Seemingly unimportant or minor

   • Synonyms: insignificant, petty, negligible

   • Antonyms: critical, substantial, vital

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Might seem trivial but collectively generate significant impact."

3. Transformative (mang tính thay đổi lớn): Causing a significant or radical change

   • Synonyms: revolutionary, life-changing, ground-breaking

   • Antonyms: static, minor, unchanged

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The cumulative result would be transformative."

4. Eco-conscious (ý thức về môi trường): Being aware of environmental issues and acting accordingly

   • Synonyms: environmentally aware, green-minded, sustainable

   • Antonyms: ignorant, careless, negligent

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Fostering a more eco-conscious society."

5. Contaminating (làm ô nhiễm): Making something impure or harmful by adding pollutants

   • Synonyms: polluting, tainting, spoiling

   • Antonyms: purifying, cleansing, disinfecting

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Ends up contaminating oceans and land."

6. Crucial (quan trọng): Extremely important or necessary

   • Synonyms: essential, vital, fundamental

   • Antonyms: trivial, optional, unnecessary

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Is crucial in tackling pollution."

7. Indispensable (không thể thiếu): Absolutely necessary

   • Synonyms: essential, vital, imperative

   • Antonyms: unnecessary, dispensable, optional

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Individual actions are indispensable in environmental conservation."

🧠 Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Inversion with "not only... but also"

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...not only cuts down plastic waste but also influences others..."

   • Translated: "...không những giảm lượng rác thải nhựa mà còn ảnh hưởng tới người khác..."

2. Complex compound sentence with conditional and result

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "If millions of people adopt such habits, the cumulative result would be transformative."

   • Translated: "Nếu hàng triệu người áp dụng thói quen này, kết quả tích lũy sẽ mang tính thay đổi lớn."

3. Appositive clause for emphasis

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Individuals are the smallest units of society and can act as catalysts..."

   • Translated: "Cá nhân là những đơn vị nhỏ nhất trong xã hội và có thể đóng vai trò là chất xúc tác..."

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