Phân tích & sửa essay"The diagrams show changes to a university campus (Woodwards) between 1985 and the present day"

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Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & sửa essay"The diagrams show changes to a university campus (Woodwards) between 1985 and the present day"

I. Đề bài

The diagrams show changes to a university campus between 1985 and the present day. Summarize the changes in the Layout of the Woodwards University in not less than 150 words

The diagrams show changes to a university campus (Woodwards) between 1985 and the present day

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Đối với dạng map, cách dễ nhất là viết mỗi map một đoạn thân bài, có thể cân nhắc chia bố cục như sau:
    • Intro: paraphrase:
      • The diagrams make a comparison between a university campus in 1985 and the appearance this campus has today.
    • Overall:
      • The present campus has become compact with many building merging together. 
      • The centre of the campus is covered in greenery.
    • Body 1: In 1985
      • The three science blocks (physics, chemistry and biology) were housed in separate premises >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "house" tiếng anh
      • There were two car parks in 1985, one to the south west, and the other was located between the Chemistry and Biology block. 
      • A road ran between the car park and the administration building.
    • Body 2:
      • The library is maintained in the same place, to the north west of the campus; however, this building becomes larger and includes an IT centre. 
      • The administration building can be found in the south east of the campus, but currently it has been reduced in size.
      • Both the car parks have been removed and have been replaced by a lecture theatre and a shuttle bus terminal. 
      • Footpaths now connect the buildings as well as the bus terminal. 

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