Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & sửa essay"The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today"
I. Đề bài
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
- The given maps illustrate the transformations taking place in a beachfront area during the time period from 1950 and the present day hoặc
- The diagrams depict modifications to an unspecified beachfront area in Australia hoặc
- The map details a 1950 Australian beachfront location and alterations in the present day
- Overall, the area has witnessed dramatic changes with the improvement of some facilities and the upgrading of transportation system hoặc
- Overall, there has been an increase in leisure facilities and motor vehicle access to the beach. However, the beach itself is unchanged.
- Dạng map thông thường nên mỗi map một đoạn thân bài:
- Body 1:
- The front beach was located to the east of the city center.
- At the end of the road, there was a car park.
- In front of the beach, we could see a pavilion, four dining tables and a playground.
- Two 25 meter-pools were situated at the northeast and northwest corners of the beach while the light house could be seen towards the south east of the beach.
- Body 2:
- The area has observed innovations with the extension of the main road to help tourists connect to the light house.
- The car park was renovated by a new one with larger space while the places of the playground and the tables were replaced by a new small parking space to meet the increasing demand of the local tourism.
- The introduction of two surf clubs next to the pools with the one on the left made bigger in size reaching 25 meters, together with a restaurant
- Body 1:
IV. Sửa bài viết HS IELTS TUTOR