Phân tích"The chart below shows the percentages of both males and females who ate 5 kinds of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK in 2006"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The chart below shows the percentages of both males and females who ate 5 kinds of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK in 2006."IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The chart below shows the percentages of both males and females who ate 5 kinds of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK in 2006.

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  • The column graph illustrates the alterations in the percentages of male and female consumers of 5 kinds of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK in 2006.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  TỪ & NGỮ NÊN BIẾT IELTS WRITING
  • Overall:
    • The percentages of females were consistently higher than those of males in most age groups, except for over 75-year-old group with equal numbers. 
    • Figures for the 56-65-year-old group were the highest in both genders.(IELTS TUTOR giải thích: the most remarkable gap could be seen in 56–65-year-old consumers)
  • Body 1: Mô tả số liệu của Females
    • The percentage of 56-65-year-old females was 27% which was the highest, followed by 22% in 66-74-year-old group.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Tổng hợp từ vựng formal & informal thường gặp
    • The third highest proportion was 20% represented by over 26-55-year-old females. 
    • It was accompanied by 19% of females over 75 years old. 
    • Those 15-25 years old constituted the lowest percentage, at 17%.
  • Body 2: Mô tả số liệu của males 
    • The figures for male groups were constantly lower than those for female counterparts, at 15%, 18%, 24%, 21%, and 19% in 15-25, 26-55, 56-65, 66-74, and over 75-year-old group respectively.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar chart illustrates the distribution (sự phân bố – the way something is shared among groups) of males and females in the UK consuming five kinds of fruits and vegetables daily in 2006, across various age groups.

Overall, the proportions of women were consistently higher than those of men in almost every age bracket, with the sole exception of the over-75 category, where the figures were identical. The most pronounced disparity (sự chênh lệch rõ rệt nhất – the greatest difference) was recorded among 56–65-year-olds.

For females, the highest share was observed in the 56–65 group (27%), followed by 22% for those aged 66–74. Around 20% of women aged 26–55 consumed the recommended amount, slightly ahead of the 19% recorded for the over-75 group. The youngest group, 15–25 years old, had the lowest proportion at 17%.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

By contrast, male percentages were lower in all comparable groups, at 15%, 18%, 24%, 21%, and 19% for 15–25, 26–55, 56–65, 66–74, and over-75 age groups, respectively.

New Vocabulary List

1. Distribution – sự phân bố

   • Synonyms: allocation, spread, apportionment

   • Antonyms: concentration, collection, gathering

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The bar chart illustrates the distribution of males and females in the UK consuming five kinds of fruits and vegetables daily.

2. Most pronounced disparity – sự chênh lệch rõ rệt nhất

   • Synonyms: greatest gap, most notable difference, sharpest contrast

   • Antonyms: similarity, parity, equality

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The most pronounced disparity was recorded among 56–65-year-olds.

3. Recommended amount – lượng khuyến nghị

   • Synonyms: advised quantity, suggested intake, prescribed level

   • Antonyms: excessive amount, deficient amount, unregulated amount

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Around 20% of women aged 26–55 consumed the recommended amount.

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Reduced relative clause

   • The highest share was observed in the 56–65 group (27%), followed by 22% for those aged 66–74.

   • Reduced from: … followed by 22% for those who were aged 66–74.

   • → … tiếp theo là 22% ở nhóm tuổi từ 66–74.

2. With + noun phrase for exception

   • … in almost every age bracket, with the sole exception of the over-75 category…

   • → … trong hầu hết các nhóm tuổi, ngoại trừ duy nhất nhóm trên 75 tuổi…

3. By contrast for cohesive device introducing contrast

   • By contrast, male percentages were lower in all comparable groups…

   • → Ngược lại, tỷ lệ nam giới thấp hơn trong tất cả các nhóm tương ứng…

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