Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 3/3/2023)
I. Đề bài
The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010

II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- The production of milk increased in all given countries except for Australia, where it decreased over the given period of two decades >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "PRODUCTION" tiếng anh
- The highest production of milk was in the Netherlands throughout the given period.
- Body 1: Số liệu 2 nước cao (Netherlands + Australia)
- The Netherlands produced 11,262,000 litres of milk in 1990, but in 2000, the production fell slightly to 11,155,000 litres, but after that it picked up again and reached an all time high of 11,466,9000.
- Although Australia was second to the Netherlands in milk production in 1990 with 11,246,000 litres, its production gradually declined and reached 9,165,000 litres by 2010.
- Body 2: Số liệu 2 nước thấp (Tanzania + Guatemala)
- Tanzania, and Guatemala increased their milk production from 87,000 and 26,000 in 1990 to 1,55,000 and 84,000 litres respectively in 2010.
- Guatemala had the least milk production throughout a twenty-year period, but it also experienced the biggest proportionate increase as milk production more than doubled from 1990 to 2000 (nêu số liệu)
- Overall:
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The table compares the annual output (sản lượng hàng năm – total quantity produced in a year) of milk in four different countries in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
Overall, milk production rose in all nations except Australia, where it underwent a steady decline (trải qua sự suy giảm ổn định – experienced a consistent decrease). The Netherlands consistently recorded the largest volume (khối lượng lớn nhất – greatest measurable amount) of milk production across the given period.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
In 1990, the Netherlands produced 11,262,000 litres of milk, before experiencing a slight drop to 11,155,000 litres in 2000. Production then rebounded (phục hồi – recovered after a fall) to a peak of 11,466,000 litres in 2010. In contrast, Australia, which ranked second in 1990 at 11,246,000 litres, saw its figures dwindle (giảm dần – decrease gradually) to 9,165,000 litres by 2010.
Tanzania and Guatemala both experienced substantial growth (tăng trưởng đáng kể – significant increase). Tanzania rose from 87,000 to 1,55,000 litres, while Guatemala, despite having the lowest production throughout, more than tripled its output from 26,000 in 1990 to 84,000 litres in 2010.
New Vocabulary List
Annual output – sản lượng hàng năm – Syn: yearly production, yearly yield, yearly manufacture – Ant: consumption, shortage, deficit – IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The table compares the annual output of milk..."
Underwent a steady decline – trải qua sự suy giảm ổn định – Syn: experienced a gradual drop, saw a continuous decrease, recorded a consistent fall – Ant: enjoyed an increase, witnessed a growth, underwent an expansion – IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Australia... underwent a steady decline."
Largest volume – khối lượng lớn nhất – Syn: greatest amount, highest quantity, biggest total – Ant: smallest volume, least amount, minimal quantity – IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The Netherlands consistently recorded the largest volume..."
Rebounded – phục hồi – Syn: recovered, bounced back, revived – Ant: declined, dropped, fell further – IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Production then rebounded to a peak..."
Dwindle – giảm dần – Syn: decrease gradually, shrink, taper off – Ant: increase, grow, rise – IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...saw its figures dwindle to 9,165,000 litres..."
Substantial growth – tăng trưởng đáng kể – Syn: significant rise, considerable increase, marked expansion – Ant: decline, stagnation, fall – IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Tanzania and Guatemala both experienced substantial growth."
Notable Grammar Structures
Comparative clause with contrast:
"In contrast, Australia, which ranked second in 1990 at 11,246,000 litres, saw its figures dwindle to 9,165,000 litres by 2010."
→ Trái lại, Úc, quốc gia đứng thứ hai vào năm 1990 với 11,246,000 lít, đã chứng kiến sản lượng giảm xuống còn 9,165,000 lít vào năm 2010.
Relative clause for additional detail:
"Guatemala, despite having the lowest production throughout, more than tripled its output..."
→ Guatemala, mặc dù có sản lượng thấp nhất trong suốt thời gian, đã tăng sản lượng hơn gấp ba lần...
Parallel structure for comparison:
"Tanzania rose from 87,000 to 1,55,000 litres, while Guatemala... tripled its output from 26,000 to 84,000 litres."
→ Tanzania tăng từ 87,000 lên 1,55,000 lít, trong khi Guatemala... tăng từ 26,000 lên 84,000 lít.

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