Phân tích"The charts below show the Internet use in different purposes in Australia in 2010,2011 and the percentage by users"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The charts below show the Internet use in different purposes in Australia in 2010,2011 and the percentage by users"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The charts below show the Internet use in different purposes in Australia in 2010,2011 and the percentage by users

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• Dạng biểu đồ này thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
  • Overall:
    • Most Australians used the Internet to communicate by emails in 2010 and 2011
    • The percentage of citizens using the Internet for social networking declined among the older population (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: declined with age)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "decline" tiếng anh
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1 (home internet use in Australia 2010-2011)
    • About 90 percent of individuals in Australia surfed the Internet with a view to contacting via emails, which was the highest figure.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt cách dùng từ "CONTACT" 
    • Social media and online payments were less popular as these purposes showed noticeably lower statistics, at about 59 percent and 60 percent relatively.
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2 (home internet use in Australia, by age group, 2010-2011)
    • Social networking:
      • Almost 100 percent of people between 18 and 25 years old used the Internet for social networking purposes, which was obviously the vast majority.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  ​CÁCH DÙNG TỪ "Majority" TIẾNG ANH
      • Only 28% of adults from 65 years old and above surfed the Internet for social media purposes 
        • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: 
          • The highest percentage was recorded among the youngest group, which accounted for 90% while those over 65 constituted only a fifth of the population
    • Paying bills online or online banking
      • In the youngest age group, the percentage was approximately 40%, which was 10% lower than that of the 25-34 age group  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng Figure / percentage / proportion
    • Emailing: 
      • Approximately 80 percent of Australians used the Internet in order to contact via emails among individuals who were 15 and above.  

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