Phân tích "The first time when an astronaut arrived at the Moon, he said "It is a big step for mind kind". However, some people think it makes a minor impact on our lives. Do you agree or disagree? (Use your own experience to explain this)" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

· Writing,Task 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The first time when an astronaut arrived at the Moon, he said "It is a big step for mind kind". However, some people think it makes a minor impact on our lives. Do you agree or disagree? (Use your own experience to explain this)" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

The first time when an astronaut arrived at the Moon, he said "It is a big step for mind kind". However, some people think it makes a minor impact on our lives. Do you agree or disagree? (Use your own experience to explain this)

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

  • Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
      • Main idea: The Apollo Moon landing spurred advancements in technology and engineering that have had ripple effects in various fields. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • The research and development conducted for space exploration have led to innovations such as satellite communication, miniaturized electronics, and medical advancements, which have had practical applications in our lives. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "innovation" tiếng anh 
        • Example: The development of satellites for space exploration has led to the development of satellite communication systems, which are used for everything from television broadcasts to weather forecasting. Satellite communication systems have made it possible for people all over the world to stay connected, regardless of their location.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
      • Main idea: The achievement of landing humans on the Moon has inspired generations of scientists, engineers, and explorers. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "generation" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • It has instilled a sense of wonder, curiosity, and the desire to push boundaries in many individuals
          • This inspiration has driven advancements and breakthroughs in multiple fields, including science, technology, and aerospace.
        • Example: Elon Musk, the founder of SpaceX, is inspired by the Apollo 11 mission. Musk is a billionaire entrepreneur who is passionate about space exploration. He founded SpaceX with the goal of making human spaceflight more affordable and accessible. Musk's achievements have inspired many young people to pursue careers in space exploration.
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