Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi IELTS 28/1/2023)
I. Đề bài
The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
![The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.](http://custom-images.strikinglycdn.com/res/hrscywv4p/image/upload/c_limit,fl_lossy,h_9000,w_1200,f_auto,q_auto/1276817/539988_595488.jpeg)
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Working adults spent the majority of their time working, while traveling to work and going out took up the least amount of time in 1958 and 2008, respectively.
- While the time spent on relaxing, sleeping, and going out decreased, the opposite was true for the other activities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "opposite" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Số liệu tăng
- Going out:
- In 1958, going out with friends and family was a common pastime, taking up 19%.
- There was a significant decline of 13% in the time spent on going out with friends and family in 2008.
- Travel to work
- The time spent on travelling to work increased four fold from 2% in 1958 to 8% in 2008
- Relaxing at home:
- The time spent relaxing at home increased from 8% to 13%.
- Working
- In 1958, almost one third of the day was spent on working (33%), and this figure increased by 9% in 2008 >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "figure" tiếng anh
- Going out:
- Body 2: Số liệu giảm
- Overall:
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