Phân tích "The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi IELTS 28/1/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi IELTS 28/1/2023)

The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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  • Overall:
    • Working adults spent the majority of their time working, while traveling to work and going out took up the least amount of time in 1958 and 2008, respectively. 
    • While the time spent on relaxing, sleeping, and going out decreased, the opposite was true for the other activities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "opposite" tiếng anh
  • Body 1: Số liệu tăng 
    • Going out:
      • In 1958, going out with friends and family was a common pastime, taking up 19%. 
      • There was a significant decline of 13% in the time spent on going out with friends and family in 2008.
    • Travel to work 
      • The time spent on travelling to work increased four fold from 2% in 1958 to 8% in 2008
    • Relaxing at home:
      • The time spent relaxing at home increased from 8% to 13%. 
    • Working
      • In 1958, almost one third of the day was spent on working (33%), and this figure increased by 9% in 2008 >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "figure" tiếng anh 
  • Body 2: Số liệu giảm 
    • Other interests or playing sports: 
      • Time spent on playing sports or pursuing other hobbies did not show any change and stood at 6% in both the given years.
    • Sleeping 
      • The time spent on sleeping decreased by 7% from….in 1958 to….in 2009.

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