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Phân tích "The values that we learn from our parents and family have greater influence on our future success than knowledge and skills we learn at school. Agree or disagee?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 14/4/2024)

April 21, 2024

Bên cạnh Sửa chi tiết 2 lần Câu hỏi Part 1 IELTS SPEAKING: ​Do you work or are you a student?, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The line graph shows the global demand of different textile from 1980-2015" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

The values that we learn from our parents and family have greater influence on our future success than knowledge and skills we learn at school. Agree or disagree?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: Most of the children mimic their parents’ activities and thus parents have a greater role in setting good examples for their kids. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "thus" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:
          • Children often learn by observing and imitating the behaviors of those around them, particularly their parents.
          • From a young age, they pay close attention to their parents' actions and attitudes, which significantly influence their own behavior.
        • Example: For example, parents who regularly argue with others may find that their child both imitate them and consider this bad practice as an ideal life tactic to solve >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "practice" tiếng anh
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: Parents are more close to children and they can teach their kids the important aspects of being a good member of the society. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase từ "factor/aspect" (Diễn đạt "tiêu chí" tiếng anh)
        • Supporting idea:
          • Parents serve as the earliest role models for their children. Children observe and emulate their parents' behaviors, attitudes, and values from a very young age.
          • Through daily interactions and observations, children learn fundamental social behaviors such as kindness, respect, and empathy from their parents.
        • Example: For instance, parents may teach their children and guide them to assist poor people by providing the food prepared by their parents. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng cụm "for instance" tiếng anh

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