Phân tích"There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng it is a positive or negative development, nhưng thực ra vẫn là dạng opinion essay.
• Intro câu 2 & conclusion: positive development (chú ý xu hướng ở đây là do computer technology càng ngày accessible & cheap nên là nhiều workers work from home & students from home)
• Body 1: Lí do số 1 vì sao cho rằng nó là positive development (nên khéo léo chọn ý liên quan đến workers, ví dụ như có thể nói việc làm online được giải quyết công ăn việc làm nhất là cho thế hệ trẻ, nhiều người làm việc online)
  • Main idea: working from home gives people a chance to manage their work and leisure time more effectively
  • Supporting idea: while people are required to sit in front of a computer and crunch numbers every day from nine to five, people who work from home can easily manage their schedule better to suit their needs in order to complete their work in a better state of mind >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "complete"
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• Body 2: Lí do số 2 vì sao cho rằng nó là positive development (nên khéo léo chọn ý liên quan đến students, ví dụ có thể nêu ý việc này có lợi cho hs ở xa, không có điều kiện học offline)
  • Main idea: Tele-learning meets the needs of learners who are working and are occupied in office time
  • Supporting idea: Given the fact that they can access online lessons anytime available, work-study students do not have to sacrifice their jobs for education >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "education" tiếng anh 
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