Phân tích "The diagrams below show the floor plans for a trade conference in 2009 and the same conference in 2010" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề Ngày 12.08.2017)

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The diagrams below show the floor plans for a trade conference in 2009 and the same conference in 2010.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Overall: the layout changed in 2010 to provide more seating and more display stands (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: apart from the main entrance and side entrance, the rest structure of the room was redesigned significantly so that it could provide more seating and more display stand)
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1: 
    • A refreshment area was located between the main and side entrances to the venue while a registration desk stood below the balcony on the right of the diagram. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "area" tiếng anh 
    • A conference hall and stage were marked on the left of the plan for 2009, facing the main entrance. 
    • Three meeting rooms were located below the conference hall. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "situated/located" 
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • The refreshments and registration facilities changed places, and a lounge area was provided in the balcony. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "facility" tiếng anh 
    • The conference hall had more seating, but no meeting rooms, and now stood on the bottom right of the diagram, occupying the space used in 2009 for an exhibition area. 
    • The exhibition area was moved in 2010 to face the main entrance, in the space previously used for the conference hall the year before. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng trạng từ "previously" tiếng anh 
    • This exhibition area was also expanded in 2010, with more display stands added and access to the balcony and lounge area.

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