Phân tích"The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today"(kèm bài sửa)

· Task 1,Writing

Bên cạnh HƯỚNG DẪN TỪNG BƯỚC CÁCH LÀM BÀI TẬP MẪU IELTS READING DẠNG FILL IN THE GAP, IELTS TUTOR cũng Phân tích "The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today" (kèm bài sửa).

I. Đề bài

The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today.

The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today

II. Từ vựng

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng map này thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
    • Overall:
    • Body 1: Viết về map 1
      • There was considerable untouched natural land located on the western side and southeast side of the park  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Grassland was on the north side of it while woodland was on the south)
      • The office and reception were next to each other and was on the north side >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PHÂN BIỆT "ONE ANOTHER" & "EACH OTHER" TIẾNG ANH
      • On the west direction of it was the IT centre while on the north-west had a car park. Both are connected to cyber security by road in the centre of had business units.
    • Body 2: Viết về map 2
      • Natural land has now been replaced with a research and development center 
      • The reception area was also removed in favor of a university hub while the adjacent offices remain the same >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PHÂN BIỆT "REMAIN & RETAIN" TIẾNG ANH
      • The innovative centre takes the place of the IT centre. 
      • The car park has reduced in size, and the business units are unchanged >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng & ideas topic "BUSINESS" IELTS
      • The cyber security building has been enlarged, overtaking previously undeveloped land.
      • There is a new train station on the southernmost tracks with walkways branching off to various facilities (IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: có thể bỏ bớt nếu dài quá)
      • There are additional biking routes along an eastern road and running through the centre of the park past the car park and new buildings as well as a bus stop on the eastern side of campus.

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