Phân tích"The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today"(kèm bài sửa)

Bên cạnh HƯỚNG DẪN TỪNG BƯỚC CÁCH LÀM BÀI TẬP MẪU IELTS READING DẠNG FILL IN THE GAP, IELTS TUTOR cũng Phân tích "The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today" (kèm bài sửa).

The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Overall:
    • The park has expanded to include more areas for research, education and improved accessibility.
    • The park has introduced more transportation amenities >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic Transportation IELTS 
  • Body 1: Viết về map 1
    • There was considerable untouched natural land located on the western side and southeast side of the park  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Grassland was on the north side of it while woodland was on the south)
    • The office and reception were next to each other and was on the north side >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PHÂN BIỆT "ONE ANOTHER" & "EACH OTHER" TIẾNG ANH
    • On the west direction of it was the IT centre while on the north-west had a car park. Both are connected to cyber security by road in the centre of had business units.
  • Body 2: Viết về map 2
    • Natural land has now been replaced with a research and development center 
    • The reception area was also removed in favor of a university hub while the adjacent offices remain the same >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PHÂN BIỆT "REMAIN & RETAIN" TIẾNG ANH
    • The innovative centre takes the place of the IT centre. 
    • The car park has reduced in size, and the business units are unchanged >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng & ideas topic "BUSINESS" IELTS
    • The cyber security building has been enlarged, overtaking previously undeveloped land.
    • There is a new train station on the southernmost tracks with walkways branching off to various facilities (IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: có thể bỏ bớt nếu dài quá)
    • There are additional biking routes along an eastern road and running through the centre of the park past the car park and new buildings as well as a bus stop on the eastern side of campus.

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