Phân tích "The chart and the graph show the number of new graduates and the their employment in the UK from 1992 to 2002" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Hơi giống Đề thi Úc 30/6/2022)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The chart and the graph show the number of new graduates and the their employment in the UK from 1992 to 2002" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Hơi giống Đề thi Úc 30/6/2022)

I. Đề bài

Task 1: The chart and the graph show the number of new graduates and the their employment in the UK from 1992 to 2002.

Task 1: The chart and the graph show the number of new graduates and the their employment in the UK from 1992 to 2002

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

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    • Overall:
      • The number of fresh graduates in the UK underwent a sharp rise to a peakfollowed by a less dramatic fall with an overall increasing trend.
      • The majority of UK students opted to follow professional careers upon graduating from university.   (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: While jobs requiring professional skills were the top preference of fresh graduates, working in a sales department was least opted HOẶC: professional jobs dominated the other jobs in the job market for graduates)
    • Body 1:
      • In 1992, there were roughly 165,000 British students graduating from university. 
      • This figure rose markedly to a peak of about 195,000 in 1997, before dropping thereafter to about 180,000 students in 2002. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "figure" tiếng anh 
    • Body 2: 
      • Nhóm có số liệu tăng
      • Nhóm có số liệu giảm
        • An opposite trend is seen in jobs related to management and administration, with the figures standing at 20% in 1992 and dropping by 1% 10 years later. 
        • The figure for professional careers showed a downward trend although much steeper, from a peak of nearly 60% to its low of around 44%. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt ALTHOUGH/ THOUGH/ IN SPITE OF / DESPITE

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