Phân tích đề & sửa essay"It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích đề & sửa essay"It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Nếu theo hướng ADVANTAGES > DISADVANTAGES thì có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao ADVANTAGES > DISADVANTAGES có thể triển khai main idea: 
      • Main idea: change mở ra những cơ hội mới, khắc phục yếu điểm từ đó giúp hoàn thiện bản thân (varying helps people to be able to adjust to difficulties and more easily find a way to overcome barriers in life)
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao ADVANTAGES > DISADVANTAGES có thể triển khai main idea: 
      • Main idea: change làm còn người không hối tiếc sau này là mình đã có cơ hội thay đổi nhưng không làm 
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: 

IV. Ideas có thể cân nhắc

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Paraphrase "trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same" = Try to shirk problems and remain everything unchangingly.
  • People will be more mature, stronger, and increase the ability to withstand sudden upheavals, which assists persons gradually perfect themselves.
  • Altering will aid everyone to get out of his or her weak points and be ready to acquire a progressive outlook. In that way, individuals have a chance to repair their shortcomings as well as promptly get success in life.
  • Change might make someone easily modify his or her nature and specific characteristics in the community. Many people in society; therefore, would easily be each other’s copies, leading the life would lack of individual diversity and becoming more monotonous and hoary.
  • This type of measure in culture in every country would make citizens forget their national origins as well as fade out the traditional values. Therefore, they would easily be assimilated by other cultural backgrounds. 

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