Phân tích"Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (IELTS Academic – 13/03/2021)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (IELTS Academic – 13/03/2021)

Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend? (IELTS Academic – 13/03/2021)

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng NEGATIVE):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: posting personal data on the Internet makes users potentially susceptible to criminal activities >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu TỪ VỰNG & IDEAS TOPIC CRIME IELTS
    • Supporting idea: The private information shared online including one’s names, addresses or social security numbers can be exploited for illicit purposes such as financial fraud.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the targeted individuals would encounter a multitude of risks such as phishing emails, identity theft or even property fraud, which decisively leads to many real-life tragedies)
    • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: People have little privacy when using the Internet >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vưng topic Internet - communication IELTS 
    • Supporting idea: If someone was to get hold of something private we may have wrote and shared it online, once it’s out there, it’s very hard to get off.
    • Example: For example, social networks provide little privacy protection. (Facebook, as one of the most popular social networks, doesn’t provide much privacy protection for their users) >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "social media" IELTS 

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