Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents need not do that as children can read books or watch TV and movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents need not do that as children can read books or watch TV and movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm ''Others think parents need not do that as children can read books or watch TV and movies by themselves”. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Diễn đạt "đọc sách" tiếng anh (Paraphrase "read book")
    • Main idea 1: When children learn things on their own, they remember it for a lifetime and also teach other students as well. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng AS WELL AS và AS WELL 
      • Supporting idea: Self-directed learning engages students actively in the learning process, promoting a deeper understanding and retention of the material.
      • Example:  For example, in modern school systems, children are involved in different activities and creative tasks that help them to learn fast and understand things faster than their parents.
    • Main idea 2: This would be much easier for the parents who are too busy nowadays.
      • Supporting idea: Self-directed learning can reduce the need for constant parental supervision, giving parents more flexibility to attend to their own responsibilities and commitments.
      • Example: For instance, a parent could enroll their child in an online learning platform, enabling the child to learn at their own pace and convenience. The parent's role would primarily involve periodic check-ins to ensure the child's progress and offer support as necessary.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm “Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này.
    • Main idea 1: it encourages family bonding. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "encourage"
      • Supporting idea:
        • In this day and age of hectic lives and busy schedules, reading together is a simple and enjoyable way for parents to take time out and focus on the family. 
        • Children also feel wanted and loved.
      • Example: Reading a book together every night before bed is a cherished family tradition that fosters relaxation, bonding, and a deep connection with our young children, emphasizing the importance of quality time and the joy of shared stories.

    • Main idea 2: it moulds children into becoming readers.
      • Supporting idea: this significantly increases the child’s potential for academic success as well as lifelong success in general. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt INCREASE động từ & INCREASE danh từ 
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm các ý khác:
    • Main idea: if parents explain the stories to their children, they will be able to understand the meaning better. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "able" tiếng anh 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Some children can understand the stories by reading, but they may not understand the actual lesson and meaning of the story like old people can. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ "old people" tiếng anh
      • Sometimes children misunderstand the lessons given in the movies and programs and parents can better explain the stories. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH DÙNG GIỚI TỪ "GIVEN" TIẾNG ANH 
    • Example: For instance, old people tell stories at night to make children sleep, in this way, children better understand the meaning and moral values that help them to become better human beings.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In this day and age, people around the world are living longer than ever before due to advances in medicine and living standards. From my perspective, this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures.

On the one hand, an ageing population brings several benefits to society. Firstly, seniors possess abundant (adj: more than enough; phong phú, dồi dào) experience, which allows them to offer valuable (adj: very useful or important; quý giá) advice to young people. Having lived through a wide range of successes and failures, they have accumulated hard-won wisdom (n: knowledge gained through difficult experiences; kiến thức có được qua trải nghiệm khó khăn) that can guide and inspire younger generations. A typical example is Ruth Bader Ginsburg, the late U.S. Supreme Court Justice, who served as a passionate advocate (n: someone who strongly supports a cause; người ủng hộ nhiệt thành) for gender equality and offered meaningful guidance to young people pursuing their ambitions. Secondly, the growing number of elderly citizens means there is a greater pool of dedicated volunteers (n: people who willingly offer to do something without pay; tình nguyện viên tận tâm) for community and government projects. In many countries, senior groups are formed to provide free education for disadvantaged children or to clean up the environment, showing their altruistic spirit (n: selfless concern for the well-being of others; tinh thần vị tha) and civic responsibility.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, this demographic shift also poses significant challenges. One major issue is the shrinking workforce (n: decreasing number of working-age people; lực lượng lao động đang giảm), which can lead to economic stagnation. A lack of young workers and innovators means that fewer fresh ideas and technologies emerge, potentially slowing business and global economic growth. Japan, for instance, where the proportion of elderly citizens far exceeds that of the young, has already experienced these undesirable outcomes. Furthermore, both governments and businesses must allocate more funds to cover retirement pensions (n: regular payments made to retired people; lương hưu) and healthcare expenditures (n: money spent on medical services; chi phí y tế). As a result, taxpayers (n: people who pay taxes to the government; người nộp thuế) face a heavier financial burden, while younger employees may need to work longer hours and simultaneously care for their ageing parents.

In conclusion, although an ageing population can enrich society with wisdom and volunteerism, it can also hinder economic progress and strain public resources, making its advantages and disadvantages equally significant.

📘 New Vocabulary List

1. Abundant (adj: more than enough – phong phú, dồi dào)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: seniors possess abundant experience.
   Synonyms: plentiful, ample, copious
   Antonyms: scarce, limited, insufficient

2. Valuable (adj: very useful or important – quý giá)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: they can offer valuable advice to young people.
   Synonyms: precious, beneficial, priceless
   Antonyms: worthless, trivial, insignificant

3. Hard-won wisdom (n: knowledge gained through difficult experiences – kiến thức có được qua trải nghiệm khó khăn)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: they have accumulated hard-won wisdom that can guide younger generations.
   Synonyms: deep insight, practical knowledge, hard-earned experience
   Antonyms: ignorance, inexperience, naivety

4. Passionate advocate (n: someone who strongly supports a cause – người ủng hộ nhiệt thành)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Ruth Bader Ginsburg was a passionate advocate for gender equality.
   Synonyms: supporter, defender, champion
   Antonyms: opponent, critic, adversary

5. Dedicated volunteers (n: people who willingly offer to do something without pay – tình nguyện viên tận tâm)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: there is a greater pool of dedicated volunteers for community projects.
   Synonyms: committed helpers, unpaid workers, selfless contributors
   Antonyms: employees, paid workers, hirelings

6. Altruistic spirit (n: selfless concern for others – tinh thần vị tha)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: showing their altruistic spirit and civic responsibility.
   Synonyms: selflessness, generosity, compassion
   Antonyms: selfishness, greed, egotism

7. Shrinking workforce (n: decreasing number of working-age people – lực lượng lao động đang giảm)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: one major issue is the shrinking workforce.>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
   Synonyms: declining labor force, dwindling manpower, reduced workforce
   Antonyms: growing labor force, expanding workforce, increasing manpower

8. Retirement pensions (n: regular payments made to retired people – lương hưu)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: cover retirement pensions and healthcare expenditures.
   Synonyms: retirement benefits, old-age payments, annuities
   Antonyms: wages, salary, earnings

9. Healthcare expenditures (n: money spent on medical services – chi phí y tế)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: cover retirement pensions and healthcare expenditures.
   Synonyms: medical costs, health spending, hospital expenses
   Antonyms: income, profit, revenue

10. Taxpayers (n: people who pay taxes to the government – người nộp thuế)
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: taxpayers face a heavier financial burden.
    Synonyms: citizens, contributors, ratepayers
    Antonyms: non-payers, defaulters, evaders

📗 Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Having + past participle (perfect participle clause)
   → Having lived through a wide range of successes and failures, they have accumulated hard-won wisdom.
   → Dịch: Sau khi trải qua nhiều thành công và thất bại, họ đã tích lũy được kinh nghiệm quý báu.
   ✅ Dùng để chỉ nguyên nhân hoặc bối cảnh trước của hành động chính.

2. A typical example is + noun clause
   → A typical example is Ruth Bader Ginsburg, the late U.S. Supreme Court Justice...
   → Dịch: Một ví dụ điển hình là Ruth Bader Ginsburg, cựu thẩm phán Tòa án Tối cao Hoa Kỳ.
   ✅ Dùng để giới thiệu ví dụ minh họa mạnh mẽ trong luận điểm.

3. Where-clause for result description
   → Japan, for instance, where the proportion of elderly citizens far exceeds that of the young, has already experienced these undesirable outcomes.
   → Dịch: Nhật Bản, nơi tỷ lệ người già cao hơn nhiều so với người trẻ, đã trải qua những hậu quả không mong muốn này.
   ✅ Cấu trúc này giúp bổ sung thông tin, tạo câu phức và liên kết ý mượt mà.

4. As a result, + clause (cause → effect)
   → As a result, taxpayers face a heavier financial burden.
   → Dịch: Do đó, người nộp thuế phải chịu gánh nặng tài chính lớn hơn.
   ✅ Dùng để thể hiện quan hệ nhân – quả rõ ràng, logic.

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