Phân tích"Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: Share responsibilities with state-owned healthcare institutions in taking care of the public’s health >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ và danh từ "share" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • reduce the pressure on state-owned healthcare institutions in terms of overload of patients and finance >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng IN TERMS OF trong tiếng anh 
        • insufficient facilities and professional capability in state hospital
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: those who choose to pay for private healthcare services will experience many benefits  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Patients have greater choices in medical services)
      • Supporting idea:
        • since private medical establishments are not limited by national budget, there is more access to advanced treatment and modern technology >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "treatment" tiếng anh
        • Benefits: 
          • the quality and speed of treatments >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "quality"
          • short waiting times for appointments and operations
          • more private and comfortable facilities.
      • Example: 

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