Phân tích & sửa đề"Many people say that universities should only offer to young students with highest marks" IELTS WRITING

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Many people say that universities should only offer to young students with highest marks. Others say they should accept people with all ages even if they did not do well. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu ủng hộ quan điểm số 1 thì có thể phân bố bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết quan điểm số 2 (là quan điểm mình không ủng hộ)
    • Main idea 1: Education is a fundamental right of everyone, and the government should encourage a person to go to school.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "ADVISE" TIẾNG ANH
      • Supporting idea 1: No matter how old a person is, he or she should be entitled to pursuit his or her own dream.
    • Main idea 2: Pupils’ academic record at middle and high school is unable to provide us sufficient information about their scholarly competence.
      • Supporting idea 2:  It is not uncommon to see highschool students with average scores graduating universities with impressive achievements and secondary school stars dropping out of college halfway.
  • Body 2: Viết quan điểm số 1 (cần nhấn mạnh mình ủng hộ quan điểm này)
    • Main idea 1: To excel academically in universities, it requires students to be competent at acquiring extensive knowledge >> Outstanding performance at middle and high schools may be considered as a precursor further success in further education.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng CONSIDER trong tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea 1: a good academic result can reflect students’ ability and determine whether or not they can fit in the academic environment at university. If students have not acquired sufficient knowledge at high school, they are possibly not qualified for the next level education.
    • Main idea 2:  a focus on high-ranking students at a young age allows the governments to concentrate their resources towards the development of high quality personnel. 
      • Supporting idea 2: Rather than taking risks in training students of mixed abilities, the states can mobilize resources to create a more favorable learning environment with improved education quality, better research capacity and facilities for a selected group of high-potential individuals.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng & Phân biệt RATHER THAN - INSTEAD OF tiếng anh

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